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My Deja-Vu

I often find myself in a faraway place in a dream, Living in a most unimaginable, exotic land rare In a graphic situation so real, I awaken in sweat And wonder out loud what I was doing there. Supposing that, perhaps, my deja-vu was real, That I was re-experiencing something of my past Another life from long ago, now purposely relived, Or was I in some eerie dream-like drama cast? Or does my creative mind wrestle in the night With wild and crazy scenarios of far-flung feat Having no foundation in realty, mere fiction borne Or, in some future time will I remember this beat, Its adventures and exploits, in mystifying dreams, And realize in them all some inscrutable schemes.
FIRST PLACE WINNER written November 7, 2021 entered "Sonnet Salutation" poetry contest sponsored by William Kekaula

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Date: 12/30/2021 5:19:00 AM
Quite possible, revisiting past lives, who can tell? Beautiful sonnet, Milton! Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/27/2021 8:39:00 PM
Or does my creative mind wrestle in the night/With wild and crazy scenarios of far-flung feat/ love where your mind went here!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/28/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 11/9/2021 7:38:00 AM
I count on these "faraway place dreams" nightly; I think they do not let me down.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 9:18:00 AM
I find them fascinating. Some of them are so strange I cannot help but believe I really lived them at one time or another.
Date: 11/8/2021 5:35:00 PM
We must be able to dream for a reason....
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/8/2021 8:00:00 PM
I think so, Shirley. I kind of liked what Vie shared below. Insightful.
Date: 11/8/2021 3:38:00 AM
In our dreams all our realities of past come to life, our hopes our desires our unfinished fiats, but deep inside we know they are all part of who we are and who we perceive to be, nicely written full of given thought, thanks for sharing this Milton, :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/8/2021 8:04:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind, thoughtful, and insightful comments on my poem. It was prompted by my true dream experiences.

Book: Shattered Sighs