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My Dearest Sweet Lord

My dearest sweet Lord
You have the kindest of hearts
You always show love
You have sacrificed for me
You saved my life with your blood




*Let the pens Flow-Tanka Poetry Contest*
sponsor: Jenish Somadas

2-22-20

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2020 6:43:00 PM

This is a very flowing tanka and sweet one for gratitude toward God. Good luck in the contest.

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/23/2020 1:11:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2020 6:42:00 PM

First, is the picture of the dog I saw before I clicked here, was that a picture you put up there of your dog? I get so confused when I see pictures above names, not knowing if it was part of an ad or if the person put it there ( I can't even figure out how to put a picture up there if it's possible). The dog looked like mine when he was younger. So cute. Let me read you poem now!!

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/23/2020 8:54:00 AM

Yes that is my Lola Beans. On the home page there is a link for managing your photos. It took me a few to figure it out but it's not to bad.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2020 5:20:00 PM

This is beautiful Mark. I adore the photo of your baby and you. My daughter is in labor right now, with premature arrival of her daughter. Have a great weekend! xxoo

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/23/2020 8:51:00 AM

How is your daughter and new grandbaby? I hope everything is ok. Congratulations and my prayers are with them.

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/23/2020 1:12:00 AM

Thank you