My Dear Mr. Hansen

"Jacoby & Meyers" -  gave me a pale
Round bellied attorney with pony tail
 "Cash Only !" asking so far
After four weeks - got disbarred
Oranges fly between bars in Palmdale...


for Carolyn's Limerick Contest on Lawyers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kelly Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Well done , Iolanda , with your clever piece and congrats ....
Hales Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Thank you for your kind words x
Haick Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's "Lawyers Limericks" Contest! ...Peace, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Congrats on the win, Iolanda
Neels Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Iolanda :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:51 PM
I remember this one! congratulations, Iolanda. Luv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 5:29 PM
congrats on the win!!
Taylor Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Congrats, Iolanda. Nice going. Ralph
Freeman Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations Iolanda, on your success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:11 PM
congratulations on your win, Iolanda. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 11:45 AM
congrats on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Reads like a winners' circle Limerick to me..Good luck with this excellent work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:31 PM
haha, he got HIS. Hey, thanks for your interesting comments at my blog. All so true! Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 3:11 AM
I just love these limericks.. Yours made me laugh out loud as well.. Good luck for the contest Iolanda ;)
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 6:52 PM
A nice pen picture worded very well, Paula
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