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My Darling Tink's

We photographed this shoot
Against frosted glass
In the shape of hearts
That captured her class

Her long blond hair
Catches the light
Her curvaceous shape
Delights

Peachy skin
Immaculate pose
She looks
My love for her grows

White silk robe
In midriff drape
This vista, my view
I am left agape

Our shoot closes
The applause we take
As i turn to my Tink's
My darling, its you who makes




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Date: 5/11/2010 3:45:00 AM
Unbelievable...I knew that I made a comment on a poem about a sculpture, that is a sculpture which I'm familiar with, and again I seen it on tv yesterday, I commented to you about it 5/8...and when I seen this sculpture again I made a mental note to search out the artist who wrote the beautiful poem, of course it was you, so...into my favz Sir so I may share it with my fam and friends ! Hope ya don't mind Mr. Fraser ! james
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Date: 5/9/2010 10:19:00 AM
Hey , were you left agape with a long e. Or agape, john's word? hahaha. Just had to throw that in! I had never heard of john's version before i met him. This poem is really lovely, James. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/9/2010 3:06:00 AM
Interesting work..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2010 9:33:00 PM
Believe it or not Mr. Fraser, this actually reminds me of a sculpture which Joseph Boneapart had done of his sister for his home in Philadelphia Pa. ! Great write Sir ! james
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Date: 5/8/2010 7:04:00 PM
Well done James, also gongratulations in Nathan's contest. Love this one as well . I posted a poem early I do not know the form. It has the same patterns as this one. Maybe i will go change my form to a Quatrain. Enjoyed the flow in your write,..p.d.
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