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My Darling Girl, My Black-Eyed Susan

My Darling Girl, your big dark eyes met mine against your pale skin and yellow hair this name sang in my heart, Susan, my Black-Eyed Susan. A wild flower you’ll be, you’ll be a kind friend, loving wife, strong mother, sweet grandmother and always you’ll be my darling girl, my Black-Eyed Susan

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Date: 5/18/2015 12:25:00 PM
back here again Alicia, thanks for the stunning write. A bit too bright, but I love it. FOREVER **SKAT**
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:59:00 AM
Hello Alicia , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, blossoms like it should..... Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:38:00 AM
- Hi Alicia, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:29:00 AM
we have a poet named Black Eyed Susan, and she is from were this state flower resides.... a nice one if you ask me... delicate ....Welcome to Poetry Soup, hope you like the community.... LINDA
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