My Dad-My Hero - Win
( The poem is in a new literary form called Sonnetina Rispetto, originally a Tuscan folk
song of the 14th Century. This is new version of the form called Rispetto)
My dad was a man of honor
His love I ruminate over
A godly love he has given
Power of his hands so secure.
There’s nothing we could not endure
He’s my mentor, my friend, my man
My dad was a man of honor
His love I ruminate over.
So busy left slushy things to mom
Someone that I can count upon
A godly love he has given
My father, my mentor, my man.
My dad was a man of honor
His love I ruminate over
Dr. Ram Mehta
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Form: Sonnetino Rispetto
First Place Win
Contest: My Dad by Leonara Ghalinta
*This form Sonnetina Rispetto h as 14 lines with 8 syllables in each line.
It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or with an Octave(8)
and a Sestet(6) lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows:
A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.
The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem.
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