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Just a simple poem to honor my Dad. He is 87. We had a nice family time, yesterday, at a Hibachi grill, watching the food flame up, be entertained, and of course great steak, seafood, fried rice ad lots of veggies. Dad had a great time, but always with a few tears, missing Mom, but also knowing how much his children love him. I know I am blessed.

My Dad! My Dad with hands so grand whether shapely straight as a clarinet or conical as a saxaphone. He blows through a woody-reed, his tongue not lashing at us, but conditioned to musically relay his love for us. My Dad! My Dad with hands so grand. They put together a Hammond organ. His feet so cheerfully press the pedals, his fingers twinkle across the keys. Whatever instrument, he sings to us; his voice good enough for us. Occasionally, my Dad would get mad, lash out, but it was not his habit. He is compassionate. He’d keep quiet, and quietly entertain.

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Date: 6/22/2025 9:56:00 PM
Hi Kim,you are fortunate to have your Dad still alive and in good health. I assume that he can still handle any musical instrument as an accomplished musician. A great tribute to him.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 7:43:00 AM
Sadly not, dear Valsa! After he had his triple bypass his fingers didn’t work as well; and when my mom passed away, he just doesn’t have the same motivation. His life is simple and routine, but he loves having his kids (us) visit. Blessings and thank you for reading
Date: 6/16/2025 7:47:00 PM
Aww, that's a nice tribute to your dad!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, dear David! I’ve grown much closer to my dad since Mom passed away. I see clearer who he is…a loving and compassionate man and very human. I thank God for this time, though sadness preceded it. God bless you!
Date: 6/16/2025 2:13:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "My Dad So Grand" write. Sounds like a wonderful day. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula! I can always count on you <3
Date: 6/15/2025 5:30:00 PM
your dad sounds like a gem of a man with a long fuse and musical talent. Thanks for sharing words about your dad. You're fortunate he's still in your life. I lost my dad 20 years ago...and miss him terribly even now. yellow rose
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 5:57:00 AM
Lost my Mom 4 years ago…how does that happen…the years go. ((Hugs)) Thank you for your sweet comment!
Date: 6/15/2025 5:13:00 PM
Sweet, sweet and nice, was a treasure to read
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 5:56:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Paige! I appreciate how nice you are!
Date: 6/15/2025 3:38:00 PM
Very nice indeed! Happy dad day!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 5:54:00 AM
:) Thank you, Abdullah!

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