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Valentines Senryu Contest Sponsored by tania Kitchin 02/04/25

red rose price rises faster than flaccid todgers ~ a blooming rip off!!!

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Date: 2/14/2025 8:50:00 AM
Yet people pay, more fool them. Cheaper at the garage lol. Tom
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Date: 2/14/2025 6:55:00 AM
Jan, very punny! We're sad here that prices have to rise a lot before people realize that our leader is concerned about his own bank account. To a lesser extent, he's helping his billionaire friends. Their increase in income for a bigger yacht and a trip to mars comes at the expense of the rest of us and the environment itself.
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Date: 2/12/2025 7:55:00 PM
So clever! Congrats, Jan!
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Date: 2/10/2025 2:38:00 PM
Your senryu is cheeky, irreverent, and definitely bawdy! Your humor is sharp, with a playful jab at both inflation and performance issues, making it a witty and unexpected twist on the traditional romantic imagery of roses. Loved it!!
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Date: 2/10/2025 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your fun write and picture. So True... Go with silk and make them last. Hooray!!!! Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............
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Date: 2/10/2025 8:21:00 AM
So funny, Jan! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/9/2025 9:54:00 PM
Haha. So amusing. Congrats
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Date: 2/9/2025 1:31:00 PM
Congrats of first place
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:43:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your first place in with your funny and clever senryu.
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Date: 2/9/2025 5:37:00 AM
Very nice Enjoyed reading the poem
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:29:00 AM
Love it Jan!! Never heard of "Todger" , learn something every day!!! Keep 'em coming, Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 2/5/2025 1:52:00 AM
My friends hubby had a flaccid todger, so she decided to take in a lodger, No time for flowers, they were at it for hours, I believe his name was Rodger.
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Date: 2/4/2025 10:26:00 PM
Funny poem. It has a cute British accent.
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Date: 2/4/2025 10:23:00 PM
Hallmark holiday!!!!Quite insightful, JA. :o/
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Date: 2/4/2025 7:03:00 PM
This one looks like a wiener! er, winner!
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Date: 2/4/2025 6:28:00 PM
You still got it! and I still love it. CayCay
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Date: 2/4/2025 4:09:00 PM
You don't need flowers if you have the 'other.'
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/4/2025 4:53:00 PM
You are so naughty but I guess I started it. ;-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2025 4:39:00 PM
lol, maybe need a suitable vase lin lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/4/2025 3:15:00 PM
Sounds like you've gone all Bobbitt lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2025 3:16:00 PM
lol Dilly - what a rip off - the price of love 'rises' for one day:-) hugs Jan xx

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