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my cynical valentine - bawdy

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Valentines Senryu Contest Sponsored by tania Kitchin 02/04/25


red rose price rises
faster than flaccid todgers  ~
a blooming rip off!!!

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2025 8:50:00 AM

Yet people pay, more fool them. Cheaper at the garage lol. Tom

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 6:55:00 AM

Jan, very punny! We're sad here that prices have to rise a lot before people realize that our leader is concerned about his own bank account. To a lesser extent, he's helping his billionaire friends. Their increase in income for a bigger yacht and a trip to mars comes at the expense of the rest of us and the environment itself.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/12/2025 7:55:00 PM

So clever! Congrats, Jan!

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/10/2025 2:38:00 PM

Your senryu is cheeky, irreverent, and definitely bawdy! Your humor is sharp, with a playful jab at both inflation and performance issues, making it a witty and unexpected twist on the traditional romantic imagery of roses. Loved it!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your fun write and picture. So True... Go with silk and make them last. Hooray!!!! Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............

Jim Healey

Date: 2/10/2025 8:21:00 AM

So funny, Jan! Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 9:54:00 PM

Haha. So amusing. Congrats

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/9/2025 1:31:00 PM

Congrats of first place

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 12:43:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your first place in with your funny and clever senryu.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/9/2025 5:37:00 AM

Very nice Enjoyed reading the poem

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/7/2025 4:29:00 AM

Love it Jan!! Never heard of "Todger" , learn something every day!!! Keep 'em coming, Happy Friday xxoo

John Read

Date: 2/5/2025 1:52:00 AM

My friends hubby had a flaccid todger, so she decided to take in a lodger, No time for flowers, they were at it for hours, I believe his name was Rodger.