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My Cousin's Wedding

My cousin shared her wishes and dreams, On our star gazing night, she whispered them so sweet As a shooting star glided down from the sky, She said, I wish ….. I wish…. all I wish are these tonight Someday, I will marry a smart, rich and handsome guy And have a grandiose banquet on my nuptial rite We’ll be dancing like a lovely prince and princess , With all my wedding sponsors on their best suits and dresses All in pink ,that’s the motif I will surely request. She kept into her dreams as several years passed by, Still searching for her prince charming who’s hard to find Unconsciously going beyond the age to give birth to a child, In a hurry at age of seventy, she took a rich ninety years old guy. The wedding was held after a day or two, The guy seated on his wheelchair with rheumatism on his toe She headed slowly at the alter to accept his shaking hands, Two nurses followed, so with sponsors dressed up in printed brown. The highlight of the wedding rite started at once, They held tightly with a nebulizers on the other hands, But the words of oath, they took time to pronounce False teeth were both misplaced and nowhere to be found. Reception followed grandiosely in the guy’s mansion, I saw many old men and women still eager to dance on the floor, With hunched back, shaking knees, they twisted rock and roll Then, sweet music played and my cousin danced with her groom. But, we all wondered how did he stand alone? He’s so heavy , I knew my cousin couldn’t help him at all, With our great surprise, his nurse was at his side like his crutch Everyone thought , he’s really a smart guy! Was he not? Then, everyone followed them so happily on the spacious hall, And in trio, they held each other so tight and moved like a fool.
Written: Sept. 15, 2012 First Place Contest: My Cousin's Wedding (funny poem) Contest Judged: 9/30/2012 Poet Sponsor: Joann Grisetti

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Date: 10/5/2012 5:42:00 PM
Hi, Birthday Girl,,, where are you?? I have a blog WAITING FOR YOU... ARE YOU OKAY,, OR JUST BUSY..XOX~PD
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments! More power and blessings to all of you always! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/2/2012 11:56:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Leonara, never too old to fall in love, romantic and funny, love debra
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:27:00 PM
Hi Leonora, , Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ I'm also glad you enjoyed your early birthday gift, I'm hoping to see you post your first blog, and contest.. you will be great...xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:42:00 PM
congratulations :) well done!!! "False teeth were both misplaced and nowhere to be found. " funniest line!!
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:49:00 PM
I'm so happy to see this got a good score. I really think it deserved a great win. Awesome, Leonora. Congrats to you.
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:14:00 AM
congrats on your win Leonora
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:09:00 AM
What a super win for you. Congratulations Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 4:18:00 PM
who says the aged cant fall in love!? lol. Congrats to you..what a sense of humor. BG
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:00:00 PM
congratulation on the win!! warm thought, Ralph
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Date: 9/30/2012 11:06:00 AM
Big congrats here and lots of smiles , happy to share a spot with you xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:34:00 AM
wow!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU MY DEAR FRIEND!! SO PROUD OF YOU...GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:02:00 AM
This had me laughing out loud... :-))) Congratulations on your well deserved win, Leonora.
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Date: 9/18/2012 12:24:00 PM
IS THIS TRUE STORY SOUNDS LIKE A FAIRYTALE VERY ENCHANTING XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:47:00 AM
a fantastic poem of wishes and dreams turned to reality Leonora .. a sure number one .. wishing u good thoughts and luck .. a refreshing delight luv ..
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Date: 9/16/2012 10:20:00 AM
funny really hilarious! I like the idea of love at all cost!
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Date: 9/16/2012 8:59:00 AM
hahaha. this is GREAT sense of humor. WOW. I love how you took this, sweetie. The judge would be crazy not to enjoy this one. It is unique because it's about old people and it's very cleverly described. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Luv, Andrea soupmail.
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Date: 9/16/2012 4:04:00 AM
I find this extremly funny, written with a wonderful wit, absolute gem this is, i'm a little concern having read the comments below, Leonora. sometimes our different sense of humours, get in my way... but i still think this is brilliant...
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:03:00 AM
Same Here Leonora, ~~~ now hurry and post another poem... Good Night~ PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:57:00 PM
Perhaps what they say is true. "Good things come to those who wait". This is a remarkable tale you've told here.
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Date: 9/15/2012 6:43:00 PM
wonderfully written poem my dear friend Nore. Congratulations in advance. proud of you!! (^_^) love **Maria**
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Date: 9/15/2012 4:40:00 PM
Winner for sure..If based on a true story, I hope that they have a long happy marriage...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2012 12:22:00 PM
Very nice Leonora!Enjoyed the read.Best wishes for the contest.
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