Andrea Dietrich Poet Etheree

My Country 'Tis of Thee

When children are taught never to forget
conflicts’ lessons, to love all humans,
to honor those through history
who, selfless, wrought liberty. . .
Then will spangled dreams for
our peace be fulfilled
as God imparts 
tomorrow’s 
grace on
all.

For Brahm Bailey's (Your) Country 'Tis Of Thee Poetry Contest
Note: The Etheree form was created by Etheree Taylor Armstrong (Feb. 12, 1918-March 14, 1994). She was born in Arkansas, USA and is known for using this form a lot.

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Line Gauthier September 8, 2018 at 6:08 PM Bravo, Andrea. Congrats on your win with this strong message.

Eve Roper September 7, 2018 at 9:07 PM Wonderfully done and thank you for your condolence..

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 7, 2018 at 3:55 AM Congratulations, Andrea on your win.

Curtis Johnson September 6, 2018 at 9:46 AM Andrea. Congrats. These few lines say it all. Love it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 6, 2018 at 9:46 AM A splendid piece Andrea! xomo

Joseph May September 6, 2018 at 9:05 AM Beautifully said Andrea..Congrats on your win..

Poet Destroyer A May 11, 2013 at 10:30 PM CONGRATULATIONS ANDREA, thanks for the nice and lovely poem you entered in my "Heaven Sent / Grace" contest. Take care of yourself and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 7:34 AM Wow! A VERY Wonderful write/ etheree poem with its fascinating form my dear friend. Enough food for thought for me, love/hugs:) Leonora

M.I.A . March 4, 2012 at 12:23 AM this is beautiful message Andrea, always fun to see poem-shaping like this ;)

Phyllis Babcock March 1, 2012 at 2:56 PM Good one for the contest Andrea. I just noticed it today while working at the shop for Ryan. Excellent Etheree my dear. love phyl

Bl Devnath February 26, 2012 at 10:21 AM Nice sincerity reminded. Really so wonderful that I have no words to thank you for this valuable piece. Done much well. Loved always and enjoyed with heart. bl

Jack Horne February 25, 2012 at 11:44 AM Lovely sentiments indeed, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico February 25, 2012 at 8:10 AM Such a lovely form you have spilled out for us today.... Form and words are top shelf as always.....luv n hugs Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2012 at 8:05 AM amazing prohectic words Andrea.. good luck in the contest.. profound piece luv.. and so true..too..

Judy Ball February 25, 2012 at 7:46 AM Amen my friend. But we can't just tell them we have to let them see it in our own lives before they will accept it in theirs. My mom used to say,"Do as I SAY do not as I do/" That's wrong because what you are saying to your children then is that you are a bad example to follow. But kids will always follow your example more than your words. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman February 25, 2012 at 6:16 AM like this. so true Andrea, today our leaders need to not only teach, but to lead by example. andrea tried to open your Winner in p.d's verse comp 'Thundering falls' told me the poem was not available. not the first time this has happened. harry

Kash Poet February 24, 2012 at 11:55 PM Yes,I also believe so.Children are the future.They should be taught about world peace.Love the message here.Best wishes.

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 24, 2012 at 11:46 PM Very interesting piece and IRONIC because I have been quite busy working on project dealing with victims of the 2 Nuclear Bombs that were dropped on Japan in Nagasaki and Hiroshima. Both bombs instantly wiped out of 70,000 people in a few seconds....EACH. Hiroshima killed anywhere from 90-150,000 people...Nagasaki 70,000. A ton of innocent HUMANS!! Your poem STRUCK ME! A fave A SEVEN!

Deb Wilson February 24, 2012 at 11:44 PM You are so right about teaching our children the right ways to get along in this world so as to ensure we will have a chance for peace~~well done Andrea and best wishes for the contest..love,Deb

Joe Flach February 24, 2012 at 11:22 PM And the best way to teach them is by living this way as an example. It is up to all of us to ensure Tomorrow's Grace is in good hands. Lovely poem, Andrea - thanks.

Robert Pettit February 24, 2012 at 10:47 PM Your etheree poem explains why the Third World War is overdue. We should all remember the past and what happened. Good work.

Cyndi Macmillan February 24, 2012 at 10:36 PM Andrea, I LOVE this! I especially liked the use of the word 'spangled' I can't see Dane NOT putting this sky high. Into my fave's it goes. Hugs --- This is basically my ambition as a mom. This is what I have been thinking but have failed to put into words. YOU ARE AWESOME.

Russell Sivey February 24, 2012 at 10:33 PM This is a spectacular write my friend! I loved all the lines in this poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this write that I have read this evening Andrea! I believe that children are taught some of these things in grammar school and on up! They won't be taught of God in school cause it's prohibited...except for religious private schools! Thank you for sharing this poem this evening! I loved your write! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2012 at 10:30 PM Andrea, hi... nice poem.. grace should be a time of forever... enjoyed your entry.. good luck in the contest..pd