My Chance

High coffered ceilings, 
	an odd filtered light, 
	mote constellations adrift,
	rooms enfilade... 

	In the room at the far end
	— the kitchen, it was — 
	I met my dead grandmother,
	her crooked corpse 
	bothering a hot stove, 
	boiling up a pot of her 
	awful, brown, sticky soup.
	She turned to me, as if to ask,
	“Do you want a bowl?” 

	Startled, I turned to leave
	(She was a ghost, after all...).
	Her boney hand, 
	still holding a soup ladle,
	brushed my right shoulder. 
	I turned. She whispered, 
	“You had your chance.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 10, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Jack, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
Jordan Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Thanks, Linda. Once again, I forgot to look, and you reminded me... Jack
A  Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 10:53 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
Jordan Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 12:10 PM
Thank you for reading it... Jack
Oyewole Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 10:22 AM
I salute your IQ Jack. You've done it so well and perfect.... Hope you seize the day~A.O
Jordan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 10:53 AM
Thank you, and I'm going to try... Jack
Anglesey Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:19 AM
I am in awe of poets who can reach so far into the depths of their existence to pull out such a miraculous piece of work. I bow to your quality of creative depth. This is most excellent. Love the goulishness.
Jordan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Thanks, Karen, for the compliment. It really was awful soup... Jack
Ainsley Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 6:21 PM
In the strike zone Jack and straight to the heart . A home run.
Jordan Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Thanks, Michael. Kind words indeed... Jack
Hicks Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 10:35 AM
This gave me chills (no joke). What an eerie story, and I'm assuming by the details that it actually happened to you. A chance to have a bowl of soup... or something more? That's the question that's on my mind when I read this. It sticks with me. Gosh what a strange experience that must have been... faving this one.
Jordan Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Thanks... It's a real experience, although she was alive at the time. The soup was real too, so sticky that it stuck to the spoon if you turned the spoon upside-down. It was universally hated, but she ate it anyway. Nothing went to waste... Jack
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