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High coffered ceilings, an odd filtered light, mote constellations adrift, rooms enfilade... In the room at the far end — the kitchen, it was — I met my dead grandmother, her crooked corpse bothering a hot stove, boiling up a pot of her awful, brown, sticky soup. She turned to me, as if to ask, “Do you want a bowl?” Startled, I turned to leave (She was a ghost, after all...). Her boney hand, still holding a soup ladle, brushed my right shoulder. I turned. She whispered, “You had your chance.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 9:29:00 AM
Jack, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2013 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. Once again, I forgot to look, and you reminded me... Jack
Date: 6/7/2013 10:53:00 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/7/2013 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading it... Jack
Date: 4/28/2013 10:22:00 AM
I salute your IQ Jack. You've done it so well and perfect.... Hope you seize the day~A.O
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Date: 4/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, and I'm going to try... Jack
Date: 4/28/2013 7:19:00 AM
I am in awe of poets who can reach so far into the depths of their existence to pull out such a miraculous piece of work. I bow to your quality of creative depth. This is most excellent. Love the goulishness.
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Karen, for the compliment. It really was awful soup... Jack
Date: 4/24/2013 6:21:00 PM
In the strike zone Jack and straight to the heart . A home run.
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:34:00 PM
Thanks, Michael. Kind words indeed... Jack
Date: 4/24/2013 10:35:00 AM
This gave me chills (no joke). What an eerie story, and I'm assuming by the details that it actually happened to you. A chance to have a bowl of soup... or something more? That's the question that's on my mind when I read this. It sticks with me. Gosh what a strange experience that must have been... faving this one.
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Date: 4/24/2013 11:03:00 AM
Thanks... It's a real experience, although she was alive at the time. The soup was real too, so sticky that it stuck to the spoon if you turned the spoon upside-down. It was universally hated, but she ate it anyway. Nothing went to waste... Jack

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