Hilda Greenhough Poet Rhyme

My Cat, Dee Dee

Her ears point forward to a sound she hears.
A sound beyond a pitch to my ears.
Her legs now crouch to attend the fears
Of the twitching nose that scours the airs.

She runs like a bullet shot from a gun.
I'm following behind on the run.
She corners and traps her small bale,
While I stoop and lift it by the tail.

      Don't worry. I set it free.

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Valsa George September 18, 2024 at 8:38 PM Cats are such interesting creatures. Dee Dee is a cute name for a cat. I can visualize the whole scene, she keenly listening to a sound and her preying instincts, revived. In the hope of catching a prey, she runs like a bullet. Beautifully written in flowing rhyme dear Hilda. Hilda Greenhough September 18, 2024 at 9:03 PM Dee Dee is over 10 years old now. I think she is starting to slow down. She does hunt in early morning but stays home in late afternoon through night. Thanks for the comment.

Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2024 at 6:07 PM Awesome frolick! Hilda Greenhough September 18, 2024 at 9:00 PM Thank you for your comment.

Franci Hoffman November 2, 2023 at 4:00 PM This is delightful, Hilda. I have a cat and can relate. Dee Dee is an adorable name for a cat. My cat's name is Callie. Hilda Greenhough November 2, 2023 at 5:16 PM Callie is a pretty name, too. I'm glad you like my poem. Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu November 1, 2023 at 3:46 PM Hello Hilda, Hyour poem is cute. Dee Dee iks a cute name for your cat. i have a cat also her name is Sparkles. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu November 2, 2023 at 2:01 PM Hello Hilda, yes cat poems are very popular. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Hilda Greenhough November 1, 2023 at 4:50 PM Thank you. Cat poems are very popular.

Gershon Wolf October 23, 2023 at 6:22 PM I see that Dee-dee is faster than a speeding bullet. Is she more powerful than a locomotive too?! Whoa... Hilda Greenhough October 23, 2023 at 6:53 PM She is more stubborn than a bucking bull.

Hiya Sharma October 17, 2023 at 1:37 AM Woah, I could actually imagine the whole scene following your words, you've definitely displayed your brilliant storytelling skills in this one and your rhymes just flow so impeccably. Really love this kitty inspired write.. Amazingly done! :) Hilda Greenhough October 17, 2023 at 1:29 PM She's a wonderful cat. She keeps my imagination roaming. Thank you for the comment.

Ink Empress October 15, 2023 at 9:59 PM So descriptive and cute how you’ve written about your cat, and the ending is brilliant! I love the line “ Her ears point forward to a sound she hears.“ i can almost see your cat doing that. And beautiful rhymes i must say! Love this Hilda Greenhough October 16, 2023 at 12:36 AM Thank you. She is a loved pet.

Eve Roper October 15, 2023 at 5:17 PM This poem almost sounded like the start of a Halloween scene. Enjoyed reading. God bless you. Hilda Greenhough October 15, 2023 at 6:35 PM Thank you for reading my poem. I like Halloween. I have decorations on display.

Karen Jones October 14, 2023 at 8:22 PM Oh I wouldn't want to touch it. Lol good poem! Hilda Greenhough October 14, 2023 at 8:28 PM Thank you .

Jan Allison October 14, 2023 at 5:29 PM we had a family cat who was an amazing mouser, she used to leave little 'gifts' of the entrails and head on the doorstep. sadly I am allergic to animal fur now but i do love cats:-) hugs jan xx Hilda Greenhough October 14, 2023 at 7:20 PM I love animals. I've raised this cat more like a dog. She understands a lot of English. I'm glad you liked the poem.