Murray Mahauariki Poet Limerick

My Bum Fluff

I remember in my early teens,

being teased about my facial hair was really mean,

people would tease and they would poke,

always trying to make jokes,

but it wasn't just bum fluff to me.


Contest: FLUFF - Carol Brown
M.Mahauariki © 2012 
1st place

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Samual Ronthorpe February 10, 2012 at 12:26 PM Congrats on an awesome write and win in Carol's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2012 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Murray. Love, Carol

Murray Mahauariki February 10, 2012 at 2:51 AM Thanks everyone. and thank you carol for a great contest.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 10, 2012 at 1:22 AM AW you remind me of my boys when they started with their bum fluff, Congratulations here xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 9, 2012 at 4:47 PM congrats Murray on a super first place win with this awesome write luv..

Lizanne Scholtz February 9, 2012 at 4:09 PM Congratulations on your win Murray, love Elizabeth

Robert Pettit February 9, 2012 at 3:20 PM Top of the heap with this one! Congratulations, Murray!

Ralph Taylor February 9, 2012 at 3:19 PM Congrats, Murray. Great erite. Nice going. Ralph

David Williams February 9, 2012 at 3:12 PM right on Muzz, been there done that, congrats,..David

Carol Sunshine Brown January 31, 2012 at 7:37 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Murray. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song January 30, 2012 at 6:28 PM A personal limerick, eh? Very nice..Good luck in the contest. It's easy to poke fun of ourselves thru our poetry...that's a sign of a lighthearted poet! Enjoyed. Gwendolen