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Livers bleed lungs gasp for breath vessels of poetry read pain disappears tears recede love floats above the sea tides of sadness recede planted in marshlands seeds friendship bloomed living for words no longer matters I embrace my brother love his might standing on cliffs ledge gazing this new morn softly I whisper we are one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/3/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hello Arthur, it sounds like you and your brother are. close. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/5/2018 12:44:00 PM
Sorry to be so late. This was brilliant Arthur, congratulations...
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:09:00 PM
Lovely, emotive piece, Arthur. Regards, Viv
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Date: 5/1/2018 12:21:00 PM
A poem that leaves one breathless and in awe Arthur! This is profoundly beautiful! Well deserving of the honor of POTD! Congratulations my friend. This is going into my faves! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/30/2018 7:25:00 PM
A beautiful poem Arthur
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Date: 4/30/2018 2:59:00 AM
" A soul obsessed shall never be set free,"! An outstanding and challenging piece of work! Enthralled and captivated by both inking and imagery! Carried into a world of wonder and beauty! Congratulations on POTD! A well deserved acknowledgment! Stay bright! A FAV!
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on POTD with this deep and emotive write, dear. A friend who is closer than a brother is a blessed treasure.
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Arthur
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb poem of the day, Arthur. Your words brought sadness as I dread the thought of losing my only brother. It's a special bond that includes friendship and more. Your poem took me to the edge of a cliff over the sea, feeling a deep loss. Absolutely beautiful! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:21:00 PM
this is very beautiful in word and tone. I see it got POTD. Big congratulations, Arthur. I hope you have been just busy and not sick like happens to many poets here now and again!
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Date: 4/29/2018 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Arthur. A beautiful and touching poem. True friendship knows no limits. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:52:00 PM
we made potd, lovely :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Brothers of the same blood and love, deeply and beautifully described Arthur - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:07:00 PM
Excellent, heart-tugging, full-of-love piece that deserves POTD! Congratulations dear Art! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:44:00 AM
how this moves me and makes me vheer for your POTD citation, art!... huggs
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:24:00 AM
Back with a BIG congratulations on POTD :) well deserved...
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:04:00 AM
So very touching about love begun, love complete! You are good at that. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:00:00 AM
I told you. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:19:00 AM
What a great choice for POTD. Congrats my friend.
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:35:00 AM
Tender penning, I get it :) congrats on potd! Have a fabulous day Arthur xomo
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:13:00 AM
Lovely, moving poem, congrats on POTD, thank you for sharing :) x
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:02:00 AM
many congrats on a very well deserved potd your friendship is something to treasure:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:43:00 AM
Touching tribute, Arthur, congrats on POTD!
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:42:00 AM
A very touching and sincere poem, Arthur! It reminds me of my last brother who died in 2015, I wrote a poem for him Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:40:00 AM
Congrats!!! On POTD! Arthur...great stuff my friend...stay in the light...WW
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