My Blueberry Boat

I’m going to sea in a blueberry boat

Using oars made of liquorice sticks,

I have some spares hid in my hair

Just in case I get into a fix,

I brought peanut butter

("Why is that" someone uttered)

Well I'll use it if I get any leaks,

And if not instead, I'll spread it on bread

To stick to the soles of my feet,

I'll sail a while, at least for a mile

And maybe a little bit more,

Then when I get back, I'll have me a snack

I'll nibble my boat on the shore!










Entry for
Welcome to my random world Poetry Contest
Sponsored By Nina Parmenter.
19/9/2019. Placed 3rd.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/24/2019 9:03:00 AM
A fun poem Gary...congrats on your win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/24/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne. :)
Date: 9/22/2019 9:45:00 AM
what a super fun poem I would nibble on those liquorice oars any day of the week! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/22/2019 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Jan. :)
Date: 9/20/2019 11:09:00 PM
My grandkids would have fun reading this one Gary. I thought it was clever and delightful! Congratulations on your deserving podium win! xxoo
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Date: 9/21/2019 2:07:00 AM
Thank you Connie. :)
Date: 9/20/2019 1:07:00 PM
I bounced along with you on this wacky journey, Gary. This was a really fun poem.
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/20/2019 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Wendy. :)
Date: 9/14/2019 8:16:00 AM
Delightful! Nicely said, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/14/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)
Date: 9/13/2019 3:10:00 PM
Nice job Gary...
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/13/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you John. :)
Date: 9/13/2019 2:07:00 PM
Really fun Gary and peanut butter is a staple for me. I could survive almost anything of I had a jar of peanut butter. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/13/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Chris. :)
Date: 9/13/2019 11:53:00 AM
Gary, light and lively and fun!
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/13/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Caren. :)
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