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My Blue Cheese Is Fish

Greasy fish, swimming in oil, Helplessly lying on my plate. It makes my taste buds boil and toil, I guarantee, it’s less than great. It’s shapeless, floppy, and limp like worms, It smells like a pile of waste. And I can’t even find the accurate terms, To describe the taste. Colorless and soggy, With hazardous bones that you can’t see, It makes my vision foggy, It’s not the food for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/3/2018 8:43:00 AM
Until I met my wife I would never eat fish. Now I have a favorite, Alaskan Black Cod. Yum yum! A belated welcome to the soup.
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Paulina Wodarz
Date: 5/3/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Richard! I actually have one fish that I enjoy (salmon) but other types of fish I hate! -Paulina
Date: 3/3/2018 6:33:00 PM
Very good poem. I'm sure my sister would be jumping up and down and yelling hurray, someone who understands me. Well done, Paulina.
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:22:00 AM
Paulina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Paulina Wodarz
Date: 1/19/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thank You, Linda!
Date: 1/17/2018 4:34:00 PM
Great first post Paulina.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Paulina Wodarz
Date: 1/19/2018 9:23:00 PM
Thank you for the support!
Date: 1/16/2018 11:11:00 PM
Wow Paulina!!! you are such a great poetist!!!!! Except, the only problem i have with this poem is that it makes your viision foggy, because i looked it up and fish cant make your vision foggy, so i disagree. I am quite mad at this
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Date: 1/16/2018 6:12:00 AM
made me smile Paulina as I love fish in fact we are having fish and chips for tea tonight with friends :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Paulina Wodarz
Date: 1/19/2018 9:23:00 PM
Thanks!

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