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My Birthday Treat

Tonight is my birthday and I'm in for a surprise My darling desires to thrill my eyes The living room is set and the lights are turned low Scented candles are lit as I await what she shows Soft ballads play from rock bands we adore To my left she enters such beauty amour In sexy black lace with traces of deep red Her curvaceous shapes play with my head Teasing and taunting in her gypsy style dance Erotic she is, my eyes captured in trance Pouting she writhes alluring my clutch Staying out of reach, denying me of touch Scintillating movements as she edges real close Her perfume entices my desire to pursue My hearts now pumping in manly crave As I catch her kisses in loving threw Closer she dances as she takes my hand As I arise and join her as we take to the floor Embraced we are on this special night Passion awaits with my girl I adore Touchingly we kiss as our hands declare Revealing to each other our bodily joys Blissful caressing declares our time Our bodies unite in loving employ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-14.php

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Date: 11/8/2014 9:14:00 PM
such a sultry temptuous treat you have . :D
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James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 3:57:00 PM
I certainly have in writing, real life, nope, but hey ho! that's the way it goes. But fun writing all the same, and it adds to the range that I've written........Cheery, James........
Date: 10/18/2010 8:51:00 AM
Pardon me while I wipe the sweat from my brow. Very passionate, James, but you should have told us it was your birthday!!! Now I have to send belated birthday greetings. I hope you had the kind of evening you are describing in this ultra-sensual poem!! Happy Birthday, my Highland Friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:10:00 PM
very sensual indeed ! what a birthday treat! take care~Deb
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Date: 10/17/2010 4:02:00 PM
I LOVE THIS ...such a write that everywoman feels sges the girl in your treat x sarah
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:13:00 PM
Happy Birthday..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2010 11:23:00 AM
Very well written.....
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:35:00 AM
Many thank you's for your lovely comments. My birthday is on Jan 4th. But I just so adore telling stories as such in my poetry. I have an overactive mind. Have a lovely Sunday all >> James
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 AM
Happy Birthday..sounds like you dont need any more gifts..lol..very lovely James. BG
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 AM
.....sigh....., oh yea , back to the comment, another fantastic write James, and Happy Birthday
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:03:00 AM
James you do this form so well. I still giggle at my effort the last time. Yummy birthday treat you got hey. Giving the ladies ideas with this one ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:52:00 AM
Happy birthday and many returns of the day, James. I enjoyed last quatrain the most
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