My Big Sister

My Big Sister

~ My big sister~ For years we use to fight My butt you would surely wipe Up and down the floor  My cries you would ignore We'd fight till I was sore Still I loved you more and more ~My big sister~ We traveled different roads Both with heavy loads No one could judge what you chose No apologies do you owe Our pains were not exactly the same Our lives we could not change ~My big sister~ You hung with the wrong crowd On corners so very loud Not afraid of anyone Protected by fists you always won If ever I was in trouble You were there on the double My enemies left in the rubble ~My big sister~ I looked up to you No matter what wrong you'd do In my mind I always knew In the family you were the glue Although weak at times You always snapped us back in line ~My big sister~ You smoked cigarettes and weed I never followed this lead Never saw the need This was your way to cope It ultimately lead to coke Which then lead to dope ~My big sister~ It was my turn to save you Fear aside I knew what to do Came through that door  So frightened by what I saw You looked so confused Your life I could not loose ~My big sister~ In normal fashion You took charge with passion Got that monkey off your back Got your life back on track Although we are not close I felt you should know ~My big sister~ This is why you are the glue This is why I will always love you Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/10/2011 4:09:00 PM
hello, Lay.. i'm just like you.. i miss everyone here on the soup.. i hardly have time to jump on here.. But, i tell you what.. my little sister and daughter try to help when they can... I love the ending to your poem... since i'm the big sister... i hope .. they consider me the glue... truly enjoyed,...p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:21:00 PM
An impressive set of rhyming verses. Good presentation.
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:23:00 AM
Lay, this poem gave me "goosebumps" the love is so "trembling" and "so raw" no matter what our siblings do or what path they follow, we are stuck like glue somehow~~
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:05:00 AM
Hi Lay. Thanks for the visit. I hope that your sister reads this wonderful piece and sees the worth and love that you feel for her. You capture life in those lines my friend. Eamon
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Date: 1/2/2011 10:40:00 PM
a shining, sentimental piece. lay... so throbbing in tonality and imagery about a dear sibling.. i only have sister and i can relate to your feelings... good luck in the contest, if this is posted as one.. :) nette .
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Date: 1/2/2011 10:17:00 PM
this is tremendously heartfelt, Lay. I just love this one from you. Was it for any contest? Thanks for writing this. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/1/2011 4:22:00 PM
I also have a big sister that I love dearly though we are not much alike..just lovely!..love,Deb
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Date: 1/1/2011 2:13:00 PM
I am so glad this story, this heartfelt poem of love to your sister, had a happy ending. What a wonderful expression of the true spirit of family love! Happy New Year! Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/1/2011 12:09:00 PM
lovely tribute Lay
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Date: 1/1/2011 11:36:00 AM
Soup Mail Lay....this is a wonderful write my friend.. I am an only child so enjoy reading about your sister and your presentation is wonderful as well.. luv is flowing in 2011 already .. with luv..
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