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My Best Vacation Ever

We set sail as Reggae music played out on the Lido. Our first night was casual; no need for tuxedo. We could eat a pizza by the Windows On the Sea or go beneath and dine on shrimp and meet the maitre d’ We could gamble, see a show, or just gaze at the ocean, then in bed, relax the head and sense the soothing motion. We woke up in Freeport where the ship would dock all day. Folks could disembark, take tours, or on the ship just stay. On board were people lounging or dancing to Calypso, working out or shopping or even playing Bingo. All day long you could find folks doing funny things like contests for the men with hairy chests or knobby knees. Day Two when we awoke, we were then in Nassau. There was stuff for everyone, from your kiddies to your grandma! Little ones could stay behind. The staff would entertain them, or the kids could tag along with mom and dad. No problem! Those who liked adventure could visit Blue Lagoon. For snorkeling with sting rays, the boat left right at noon. I got to pet a dolphin, but extra had to pay to swim with one! That was sure an extra special day. In town I got nabbed quickly by a plaza beautician. Getting braids was all the rage, so people got their hair done. We went to the gangway before the ship set sail. Those not having fun by then were deader than a door nail. “Day at Sea” arrived as the trip was winding down, and the biggest night was coming; women wore a gown. That final evening getting all dolled up to dine was when I wished instead of ending, the trip would start again! Gals and guys with braided hair; everyone looked nice. Ah, the midnight feast with pretty sculptures carved in ice. The ultimate for having fun unless you were just snoozing, in the laid-back natives’ lingo, I say “Mon,” I sure loved that cruising. (may not be following precise time line, but this was before year 2000 that I took my one and only cruise, so I'm a bit fuzzy on precise day by day details. it was a Carnival cruise only 3 to 4 days in Bahamas and back to Florida) Feb. 1, 2022 for "My Favorite Vacation In Rhyme" Poetry Contest of L. Milton Hankins

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Date: 2/6/2022 11:16:00 AM
Ah! The price I paid after seeing the B&W version of Titanic that Barbara Stanwyck had done, "When I was one and twenty..." (I was hooked on poetry since). Fortunately, I didn't see the hit at the time I flew on that Cessna with my friends in 1980, it just came out, Airport '77 with Jack Lemmon & Olivia de Havilland. Grant our conveyance to and from differs, still, we conveyed similar sentiments in its rarest form my friend, Aloha, aka William~moving forward in life.
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Date: 2/5/2022 5:39:00 PM
Thanks for taking me along on your Caribbean vacation. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Sounds like a fun trip; you took me with you! LOL. :) Paulette
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your prestigious win. Enjoyed reading !
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:50:00 PM
congrats on your placement! was thinking about going on a cruise, but since covid I'm sure the rules have changed!
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Date: 2/4/2022 5:13:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your podium win!
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Date: 2/4/2022 4:58:00 PM
I love your entry Andrea as I said and it sounds like a most wonderful time was had by all. Those memories to keep you warm this winter! Congratulations on your podium win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/4/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thanks for taking us along so we could enjoy a virtual cruise with you, Andrea. It was a wonderful trip. In my mind, I really did enjoy all the adventures and activities. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 2/4/2022 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium placement in my vacation contest. Loved this short cruise to the Bahamas. It brought back memories of a weekend I spent there many years ago!
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Date: 2/2/2022 4:01:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... as long as the sea behaves itself, a cruise is magical. Nothing to wont for and great ports to visit. You brought back memories Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 2/2/2022 3:42:00 PM
Harry Belafonte - Day-O (The Banana Boat Song) a favorite! Good luck! Bo Derek has nothing on you!
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Date: 2/2/2022 2:30:00 PM
The closest I've come to going on a cruise is watching a Tom Cruise movie. Sounds like you had lots of fun! Enjoy your day, my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2022 1:09:00 PM
It all sounds wonderful Andrea. I get seasick even with pills so I don’t sail. I enjoyed the cruise you took us on my friend. I hope you get to enjoy another one day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/2/2022 5:56:00 AM
You sure seem to remember a lot of details from your cruise, Andrea:) love the description:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/2/2022 6:43:00 AM
I saved the brochures so I remembered the names of certain things. My treasured souvenirs.
Date: 2/1/2022 8:00:00 PM
Cruise is my favourite vacation too, have been fortunate to take a few around the Mediterranean ~ you’ve painted a lovely poetry picture of your vacation, Andrea!
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Date: 2/1/2022 7:31:00 PM
Andrea, A lovely voyage in braids and reggae, just what the doctor ordered. So loved this trip. -Richard
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