My Beloved Eternally

weeping in the forsaken land 
of my desolated heart’s remains;
the wind blows, and gusts prevail,
I sense your essence in the breeze
emerging from the dust I was found
as the tempest rages in warm rains,

sounds of swift ivory doves cry out,
never cursed or full of deep blight;
fleeting into the ebon night;
for our love loses not insight,
they know how our love does outshine 
with flickering light-
bound by love and affection"
my alleviation found in perfection-
I embrace you…you hold me tight
your genuine adoration still sustains
sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection,
for I am but a woman (*or man*) 
craving to be near you for all of eternity-

I knew the pain of loss and despair 
you carried with ease;
saturated in loneliness were you-
yet you stay with me,
longing for my hopelessness to cease,
descending onto my grateful knees-


"a million fairytales tremble at us,
 our merits might have not rejoiced thus
black ravens plague this existence,


intense obscurity of the calamity 
I faced before you attains-
and...
you strove pure and noble, 
feeling of hope, we remain 
and I shall feel this pure affection 
or you, my beloved…eternally.


9/22/2019

Poetry Contest: Lu's Poem Switcha-roo 
Sponsored by: Lu Loo
2 inserts 
our merits might have not rejoiced thus
you strove pure and noble, feeling of hope, we remain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/8/2019 7:47:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/7/2019 6:43:00 AM
just beautiful sweet Eve...Every line melts into the next, loved it...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. :)-luloo
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:52:00 AM
You have done this exceedingly well. This contest is too difficult for me right now. It is just too much thinking. GREAT JOB!
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:52:00 PM
This is amazing. I didn't know what to do with this contest, but you've done it so beautifully. God bless you and wish you success in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2019 9:41:00 AM
This is so pretty and reaches deep. Personally I think it is one of the best I have read so far for Lu Loo’s contest. Hugs Rick
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:47:00 AM
A very deep and romantic verse Eve. I dont think that you will need luck with this write. Tom
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