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My Beloved Eternally

weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains; the wind blows, and gusts prevail, I sense your essence in the breeze emerging from the dust I was found as the tempest rages in warm rains, sounds of swift ivory doves cry out, never cursed or full of deep blight; fleeting into the ebon night; for our love loses not insight, they know how our love does outshine with flickering light- bound by love and affection" my alleviation found in perfection- I embrace you…you hold me tight your genuine adoration still sustains sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection, for I am but a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all of eternity- I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease; saturated in loneliness were you- yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease, descending onto my grateful knees- "a million fairytales tremble at us, our merits might have not rejoiced thus black ravens plague this existence, intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains- and... you strove pure and noble, feeling of hope, we remain and I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved…eternally. 9/22/2019 Poetry Contest: Lu's Poem Switcha-roo Sponsored by: Lu Loo 2 inserts our merits might have not rejoiced thus you strove pure and noble, feeling of hope, we remain

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Date: 10/8/2019 7:47:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/7/2019 6:43:00 AM
just beautiful sweet Eve...Every line melts into the next, loved it...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. :)-luloo
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:52:00 AM
You have done this exceedingly well. This contest is too difficult for me right now. It is just too much thinking. GREAT JOB!
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:52:00 PM
This is amazing. I didn't know what to do with this contest, but you've done it so beautifully. God bless you and wish you success in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2019 9:41:00 AM
This is so pretty and reaches deep. Personally I think it is one of the best I have read so far for Lu Loo’s contest. Hugs Rick
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:47:00 AM
A very deep and romantic verse Eve. I dont think that you will need luck with this write. Tom
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