My Beloved
When I saw the beauty of my beloved;
I fell on my knees, worshiping!
Is there anything more divine than my beloved's charm?
When sun shines, it gives birth to Life,
and when my beloved smiles, LOVE is born.
(Please leave a comment on how to improve my writing skills. I am open for criticism.)
- Harj
Copyright © Harjinderpal Randhawa | Year Posted 2013
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