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My Beloved

**************************************************************************************** Silver this chalice; placing it atop the mantel to stoke the fire which burns ~ In red the wine while night spreads its cloak, and frost becomes the glass Amid this but another autumns repose; bare the branches dripping to grasp Visions which etch her beauties name, about the windows pane; walking up the path... Sage the vase where petals fall, in joyous shadows upon the wall Pirouetting in silent streams of light; her knock, her voice, my hearts delight ~ **************************************************************************************** ...“Gold The Chalice of, My Beloved” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 3:35:00 PM
love it =^_^= its amazing
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:57:00 PM
Well written! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:17:00 PM
simply beautiful =)-edwaard
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Date: 11/10/2011 3:13:00 PM
Your soul appears in each of these amazing poems you write. Such images to devour and soft gentle touch that creates the magic. I love our visits and enjoy reading yours Sarah. Hugs to you Lizzie.
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:14:00 AM
your poetry is now my new obsession. thank you for your lovely comments on my poetry
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Date: 11/8/2011 8:10:00 AM
Great poem, I feel the depth here! You can really put out a theme, that in which is quite excellent!
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:03:00 AM
Yummy soup for you my dear ;)...luv shannon
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Date: 1/30/2012 11:37:00 AM
* "MMMM * I WANT THAT * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *
Date: 11/5/2011 11:15:00 PM
my hearts delight,,,,,very striking and brilliant,,,,see if you can read my poem that is named the same,,,it is one of my best....
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:36:00 PM
Sarah I am again at a loss for words when trying to describe such beautiful and rhythmic poetry...your writing 'oozes' pure passion...left wanting more...hugs and kisses to you in your continued success...luv shannon
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:38:00 PM
* "I'll ALWAYS LOVE YOUR BEAUTY BABY." *
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:33:00 PM
* "I FIND MYSELF OFTEN THINKING ABOUT * YOUR PERFECT BEAUTY * LONGING TO LOVE YOU * TO KISSSS YOUR LIPS * TO TASTE YOUR JOY * TO CARESS YOUR TREASURES * MAKING LOVE TO YOU * TIS ALL I WISH * MY PRECIOUS BEAUTIFUL BELOVED * MY LUV!!" *
Date: 11/5/2011 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful Sarah, thank you for the lovely comment on my poem xx Dawn
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:46:00 PM
* "I LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH BABY * YOUR BEAUTY * MY DEAR BEAUTIFUL DAWN * SHALL FOREVER BE MY LUV." *
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 12/11/2011 8:29:00 AM
You Are a awesome poet x :) Love Dawnie
Date: 11/4/2011 11:21:00 PM
why??? SARAH, what a delightful poem.. a very lovely image... i wish my man could drip with such pretty and lovely knocking words... Thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 11/4/2011 8:01:00 PM
Sarah....lines 2/3/5 work very good! love, jimbo
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Date: 11/4/2011 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful Sarah, Love how you bring the rhyme in one line - so effective; and as always, your content is eye popping.
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:45:00 PM
Very expressive and poetic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting upon my work..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2011 1:15:00 PM
Amazing poetry from you....
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