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My Beautimous Man

Dedicated to My Timothy Lee I love you and it has been said, 'love is blind.'
My beautimous man is my favorite visual treat. Times staring at him are times I often repeat. His blond tendrils hang down, outside his do-rag, and are curls my fingers just have to twirl and grab. Fierce, piercing blue eyes allow his gaze to melt me, happens all the time and never do I ever mind. The rich pay surgeons for cheekbones my man has. My knuckles sometimes trace each bones span. He has such a good-looking nose, not big or small, it’s a nose I frequently kiss on my tip toes. Perfect lips motivate my own to seek his kiss. They aren't thick or thin, but ideal sized bliss. I’m mesmerized by his labor rustled arm muscles that grow a need for my cheeks to muscle nuzzle. My beautimous man said my vision needs to be checked because no features of his do my eyes accurately detect. He said his curls do hang down, but no hair is on his crown. He took me to a mirror to see lines under his eyes clearer, said his cheekbones are no longer sensual but skeletal, his nose now nostril hair grows and rudely hair shows, plus, his muscles have aged and are now sad sag designed. I asked what word bits would he now hurl about his lips - he pulled me close and said, ‘only kisses are on my lip script.’
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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:10 AM
By the way , did you see he did another song for you at his page. Go see!
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Caycay. I hope you figure out how to take the song Jerry created for this sweet poem and attach it to your lyrics. I finally listened all the way through. He did marvelous job with your sincere well expressed lines of poetry. Now that my school has folded, I am thankful I got help from students on how to do music files to get his songs attached to my lyrics. I had to rename each file and also compress it. Hope I can remember the procedures if I ever get more songs created for me.
Godwin Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Did you read my 4-box comments to him? He's beyond thanking, I haven't the words. Did you see the pic I put on this page? Nope, didn't know Jerry had grabbed another to bless me with. Surely, it gives him a lot of satisfaction. Wow. I already have "Beautimous Man" on my computer. CayCay
Edmonds  Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 2:41 PM
That’s so lovely CayCay, a wonderful tribute to your man… Beryl
Miller Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Back with congratulations
Winter Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:29 PM
Dear CayCay, your poem is a gorgeous tribute to your husband and the beauty of love and acceptance .You've captured the tender moments of admiration and affection with such sincerity. The way your perception of your partner evolves from physical perfection to deeper connection is truly heartwarming. Best, Anne
Buhagiar Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 2:06 AM
I see that despite all. you love your hubby. Don't met completely, though I suppose I still have to see a real photo of yours. Your friend from Malta, Europe.
Baker Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:28 PM
Nice tribute to your man, CayCay! We all age and change but those kisses are still sweet as ever. Thanks for honoring him with your loving words of poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Miller Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 2:49 AM
Yes I am well into my Fall years. This is a beautiful poem of love so well penned, it reminds me of when I catch myself in the mirror unexpectedly and wonder who that is a reflection of, lovely writing
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:19 PM
This was such a fun and sweet read! I love how it moves from pure admiration to playful self-deprecation, and then lands on that adorable, romantic ending. It’s lighthearted but still full of genuine affection.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:33 PM
This is adorable, Caycay. It strongly shows your love for him and then brings us down to reality although you still see him in this cute romanticized way!
Hind Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 4:41 PM
So sweet and romantic, you're both blessed - <3
Poet Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 2:22 AM
I find great delight in the truthfulness, authenticity, and wit woven through your poem, CayCay. There lies the essence of genuine love, indeed! What a splendid piece of writing!
M  Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 2:12 AM
Haha….l absolutely love the honesty , realness and humour in your poem CayCay. That is true love right there!! Brilliant write! Debx
Buhagiar Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 2:05 AM
Charming. Others may not appreciate. You do. That is the most important thing in life. Poetry hugs.
Manassian Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 1:07 AM
Awwwwww... this is such a lovely tribute! LOVED the ending... romantic and sweet, like it should be. My husband also laughs at my compliments. Still, he's handsome to me. Thank you for your lovely visit to my page. I appreciate it. Your comment was also uplifting. Blessings to you.
Gasun Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 11:43 PM
A very beautiful dedication poem for your hubby my dear poet friend, Caycay! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks a lot for sharing. Belated thanks also for reading and commenting my poem. God bless you always. Happy weekend/new week ahead! Hugs
Buehler Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:14 PM
This is a charming tribute, that I enjoyed reading, CayCay. Lovely writing! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:46 PM
your husband sounds extraordinary...I have an image of him now. Nicely done! enjoy your weekend, hugs, Sara
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August 9, 2025 at 11:16 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Great Ending. "‘only kisses are in my lip script.’" Priceless Words... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away........
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:47 AM
- What a beautiful description of your dear husband, CayCay :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 7:40 AM
ooh CayCay your man sure is a keeper - what a beautiful tribute to him - I hope you share this gem with Tim! hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 8:21 AM
I did, I read it to him before I posted it to be sure he liked both the upside and the downside, one he loved the other he accepted as the truth he tells me each time I tell him how beautimous he is, I'll let you figure out which was which. LOVE the enthusiasm in your comments, Jan. Love you, CayCay
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