My Beautiful Encounter

My Beautiful Encounter

I’ll never forget the first time I met You.
It was at Mass on Christmas morning.
You were there and so was I.
I’d seen You at Mass before but we had never really met.
This time I happened to notice You looking at me.
At first I couldn’t understand why You were gazing at me so intensely.
I looked away and back again but You were still there.
I looked over my shoulder to see if it was the person behind me You were looking at.
But no, it was definitely me.
It was like You were standing directly in front of me 
Looking down into my face 
So that I couldn’t help but see Your eyes.
Except You didn’t just stand there.
You hung there on the Cross in Calvary.
And in Your Agony Your eyes spoke only of love and compassion.
So much so that I felt compelled to look deep into them.
And then it dawned on me.
How blind was I to not see what was right in front of my eyes?
How close I came to not understanding that it was You.
You healed me.
You forgave me.
It was all thanks to You.
I’ll never forget the first time I met You Jesus.
It was at Mass on Christmas morning.

by Jean McLoughlin 12/01/2016

Winning 15th Place in Rob Carmack's Competition "One of your Best" 01/07/2016
Winning 10th Place in SKAT A's Competition " New Years or Christmas" 01/13/2016

A Message from the Author.
This poem is the true story of my divine encounter with Jesus on Christmas Day a few years ago.
This poem follows on from the story in my poem 'The Gift of Forgiveness'.
This poem describes a vision that became real.
At first I hid from His gaze, then later felt very guilty about this.
Please read my poem 'Jesus' Eyes - A Sedoka' for a description of Jesus' eyes.
Thank you.
From Jean

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Date: 11/8/2017 3:20:00 PM
This poem put a lump in my throat. Good stuff.
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 11/9/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, I know what you mean!! Blessings. From Jean
Date: 1/26/2016 9:30:00 PM
JEAN, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/27/2016 4:35:00 AM
Hey thanks very much for the congrats Linda, Love from Jean
Date: 1/14/2016 4:54:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Jean.
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/14/2016 5:08:00 AM
So kind, thank you Dr Upma, love from jean
Date: 1/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
Jean, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/14/2016 4:52:00 AM
Ah thanks Linda, I'm thrilled! Love from jean
Date: 1/13/2016 11:58:00 AM
Jean, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love **SKAT
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/13/2016 12:23:00 PM
Ah cool SKAT! That's just made me so happy! Thank you so much, love from jean
Date: 1/8/2016 7:51:00 PM
Jean, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:15:00 AM
Oh He does Janice, we are so blessed! Thank you so so much my dear. Jean
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:09:00 AM
This beautiful, moving poem conveys so clearly its theme: Jesus has the power to look into the "eyes" of each person! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/8/2016 10:18:00 AM
Oh He does Janice, we are so blessed! Thank you so so much my dear. Jean
Date: 1/7/2016 8:27:00 PM
Jean, congratulations your winning placement on this touching and beautiful write. I really enjoyed the read~Caryl
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/8/2016 3:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Caryl, you're v kind, congrats to u again! From Jean
Date: 1/5/2016 1:02:00 PM
What a wonderful poem of love for Him... I must confess it snuck up on me because of the way you cunningly wrote it! BRAVO Jean! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:19:00 PM
Oh thank you Keith, please forgive me for my cunnning, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! From Jean
Date: 1/4/2016 5:26:00 PM
Excellently penned observation of divine intervention. Thanks for stopping by my page with your warmth. Peace and blessings.
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/5/2016 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for reading Iris, your very welcome. Love from Jean
Date: 1/2/2016 2:40:00 PM
What a lovely meeting that was. Welcome to our corner. Love, Joyce
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/2/2016 2:49:00 PM
Lovely meeting you too Joyce! Thanks for your warm and welcoming words. Love from Jean
Date: 12/31/2015 8:31:00 PM
A beautiful write... Hugs SKAT
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Date: 1/1/2016 5:31:00 AM
I'm so glad you like it SKAT, thank you so much. J
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