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My Backyard Volcano

My Backyard Playground....Mt. Lassen Peak Our playground is a mountain steep Come climb with me to Lassen's Peak! It guards our valley, rust and green Like roughing it? A camper's dream! Or take a picnic for the day Such beauty takes your breath away With lakes and streams and meadowland Boiling mudpots, volcanic thrills And sulpher springs to take a bath With fish and game and hiking trails In summer take your fishing poles Or ski the slopes when winter calls One hundred years, since last it blew Prepare to run....'cause it ain't through!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Inspired by Brian's contest "SONNET ME" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lassen_Peak

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Date: 5/8/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congrad's on your #1 smarty gal! Do the I'm #1 dance!!!! Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:01:00 PM
Ah, but I clearly see you enjoy the risk, Carrie!...Congratulations! (Maybe it will wait another 100 yrs. before it blows its' stack?) I lived in Northern California for 2 years when I was in the Navy and can appreciate how beautiful that part of the state is - Tim
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Date: 5/4/2010 11:40:00 PM
Its a lovely place and this is terrific. Congrats ..BG
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:43:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/3/2010 12:41:00 PM
congrata for win in brians sonnet very nice good ending
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your first win, Carrie! It is an amazing Sonnet. I can imagine Mt. Lassen's Peak...it must be a breath-taking sight! Enjoy your honor. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Sonnet Me" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 2:47:00 PM
awesome win Carrie and well deserved - warmest congrats glad it was you. : )) love and hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:42:00 PM
Congratulations, CArrie!!! why am I not surprised? LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on placing in Brian’s Sonnet Me contest with this wonderful poem. Your creativity shines. Living on the edge of danger...like California, falling off and Florida sinking! What a fun place and a fun write! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:51:00 PM
Lovely rhythm to this great poem Carrie. Clear descriptions, congratulations on your top placing.well done...Margaret
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:31:00 AM
Most excellent...I didn't even have the courage to try. Once again, you're the best! RAY
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Date: 5/1/2010 10:03:00 AM
very nice congrats on your win faleshia
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie, on first place, with this lovely sonnet..I love picnics in nature.. peace and harmony... love constance
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:10:00 AM
Very nice. Very nice Sonnet. Very nice that you won (again). Very nice description of a very nice location. Not that you need me to tell you this, but... girl you are good!!! Be proud of your talent. Continue to awe us all.
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on taking first place, Carrie. Loved this poem the first time I read it and am glad to see you receive a well deserved honor. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:47:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Brian's contest... a great and detailed piece on your home town and a wonderful win for your poetry portfolio..its getting bigger and bigger sweetie..luv..from the "Sweetheart" Linda-Marie..enjoy your terrific win ...
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Date: 5/1/2010 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'BROKEN MONOKU' is now open.Perhaps you could soupmail to confirm the forwarding address I have on file is still okay to use.
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Date: 4/22/2010 1:40:00 PM
great idea for a little sonnet on a place you love. I just can't think yet what to do for this one! I love how it seemed so sonnet like despite being unrhymed, simply by your keeping the meter. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:32:00 AM
I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Carrie. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2010 12:59:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie and for your welcome comments on my postings recently.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:19:00 PM
Good luck in Brian's contest and this is surely a winner!! They say if Yellowstone ever blows it will wipe out the Pacific NWest but you don't hear much about Lassen ... hmm ... and then there's Shasta ... LOL ... we're surrounded!!
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:09:00 PM
You erupted a great poem for the contest Carrie, best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:01:00 PM
Wow, that is quite a beautiful mountain! Hope you are not in any danger from volcanic eruptions. You live in quite a scenic area.
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