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My Arabian White

Majestic he looks My Arabian stallion He's whiter than white So placid to all around His name, we call him Snowflake My entry into Constance's 'Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes' contest James Fraser

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2010 10:04:00 AM

Finally reading all the winners from this contest. I am amazed how many good ones I've seen. Congratulations, James. It's awesome to be part of THIS winners' circle! Luv, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 10/30/2010 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl

Andrew Crisci

Date: 10/28/2010 11:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your amazing win, James! Snowflake must be a wonderful horse. It's a lovely Tanka written with pride and love. Thanks for your kind comments. God bless. Have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/28/2010 1:12:00 PM

beautiful image, congrats on your win James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2010 3:35:00 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry luv.. enjoy your grand win as I have enjoyed reading your poetry tonight ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2010 3:11:00 PM

Dear James, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/26/2010 1:17:00 PM

Fine Tanka and fine win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/26/2010 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2010 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations James on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol

Jamecia Buggs

Date: 10/20/2010 8:13:00 AM

beautiful image.Great tanka.i really enjoyed this one.Love,Jamecia

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/20/2010 8:03:00 AM

beautiful entry, good luck in the contest, ( I had an anglo-arab once, they are so beautiful)p.s. your comment on lavender was steamier than the poem, made me blush.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2010 12:46:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this neat write..I can just see the Knight on his stately horse..Sara

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/17/2010 12:24:00 PM

He sounds beautiful, James. Nicely written piece.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2010 11:03:00 AM

Do you really own an Arabian, James? They are magnificent horses and such a joy to ride. "Snowflake" is a beautiful name for one. Best wishes in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/17/2010 10:03:00 AM

Very beautiful,so nice to read you here my souper friend!Celene.