James Fraser Poet Tanka

My Arabian White

Majestic he looks
My Arabian stallion
He's whiter than white
So placid to all around
His name, we call him Snowflake







My entry into Constance's 'Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes' contest

James Fraser

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Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2010 at 10:04 AM Finally reading all the winners from this contest. I am amazed how many good ones I've seen. Congratulations, James. It's awesome to be part of THIS winners' circle! Luv, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey October 30, 2010 at 10:26 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl

Andrew Crisci October 28, 2010 at 11:34 PM Congratulations on your amazing win, James! Snowflake must be a wonderful horse. It's a lovely Tanka written with pride and love. Thanks for your kind comments. God bless. Have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Francine Roberts October 28, 2010 at 1:12 PM beautiful image, congrats on your win James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 26, 2010 at 3:35 PM Congrats James on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry luv.. enjoy your grand win as I have enjoyed reading your poetry tonight ..

Carolyn Devonshire October 26, 2010 at 3:11 PM Dear James, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson October 26, 2010 at 1:17 PM Fine Tanka and fine win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta October 26, 2010 at 12:43 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win, James

Carol Sunshine Brown October 26, 2010 at 12:18 PM Congratulations James on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol

Jamecia Buggs October 20, 2010 at 8:13 AM beautiful image.Great tanka.i really enjoyed this one.Love,Jamecia

Francine Roberts October 20, 2010 at 8:03 AM beautiful entry, good luck in the contest, ( I had an anglo-arab once, they are so beautiful)p.s. your comment on lavender was steamier than the poem, made me blush.

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2010 at 12:46 PM Good luck in the contest with this neat write..I can just see the Knight on his stately horse..Sara

Kim Hilliker October 17, 2010 at 12:24 PM He sounds beautiful, James. Nicely written piece.

Carolyn Devonshire October 17, 2010 at 11:03 AM Do you really own an Arabian, James? They are magnificent horses and such a joy to ride. "Snowflake" is a beautiful name for one. Best wishes in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield October 17, 2010 at 10:03 AM Very beautiful,so nice to read you here my souper friend!Celene.