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My Advice Isn'T Being Taken Nice

Why does it always seem When I try to help redeem Someone from a situation I get an interrogation Why did you ever get involved This problem could have been solved Without input and advice From you it's not very nice Sticking your nose in affairs Leaving me sadness and tears My stomach turns into knots Cause it's coming from my heart I'm showing no disrespect But I feel the neglect Pushed aside with no regard I'm taking it very hard I'm not sure just what I did To make others flip their lid My gentle guidance is mistaken For rudeness and it is makin' It difficult to be a friend Cause I'm to nice to defend The reasons for what I say I just have to walk away With the help that I attempted Knowing it was not accepted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/5/2014 1:15:00 AM
I can relate! Nicely written
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Date: 8/3/2014 10:08:00 AM
Great write Robin this is a problem that we can all relate to at some time in our lives. hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:26:00 AM
Robin, on that question you asked me, It wasn't a dream but it was so short, it might as well have been!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:43:00 PM
Now, Robin, let me give you a little advice about this poem. No, just kidding. This is a hard one and I suppose all of us can relate to it. You brought the point across quite skillfully and it was a pleasure to read.... Robert.
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Date: 8/1/2014 3:05:00 PM
They always want help and advice till you give it to them! Lol.. Great write, Robin, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/31/2014 5:52:00 PM
I sure do know THIS feeling, my sweet friend > You captured it well. Just be yourself. It's all you can do.
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Date: 7/31/2014 4:53:00 PM
Robin great rhyme work on this write. Nice work.
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Date: 7/31/2014 2:38:00 PM
Robin I think this relates to most of us, very good...David
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:30:00 PM
very good one, Robin. This kind of thing has happened to me right here at Soup. haha. I think sometimes i just have to keep my big mouth shut!!
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:54:00 AM
Simply great Robin ! Lovely rhyming ,, unique n thoughtful !
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