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My Odd Poetic Ode

I learn to deal with charm that spills, Aware of rate that sparks new psalm, Sift form and feel to forge and fill. I sit and wait for muse to come, Listen for hint and feel to spur Voice at the gate to spill and sum. I watch light tint as tact minds blur, Sense soft heart speak in pulse and grain, Words start to mint new thought form slur. I steal a peek that stays on pain, Shift strands of lines to weave brisk rhymes, Feel knows a peak to prime bold gain. I choose a vine to spark my time, Poise spreads a tact that signs a style, Stretch line for line to form brisk chimes. I word a fact to cast a smile, Push and then pull to wear a gaze, Woo a fond act to groom verse miles. I play the fool in this mind maze, Learn to fund blooms that spread sweet scent, Seek feel that pools sound urge or craze. I now make room for clear ascent, Pen writes that zoom to firm intent. Leon Enriquez 11 Mar 2014 Singapore (Note: This is a 8-syllable rhyme pattern in Terza Rima with an internal rhyming scheme.)

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Date: 3/11/2014 7:14:00 PM
Poet, a Greek word, means creator therefore any poem is a creation- a beautiful creation- as this one is! Great work dear friend Leon! , .
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/12/2014 6:18:00 AM
So happy to see you are well educated in ancient Greek thought! Read my biography when you are able to.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/11/2014 10:43:00 PM
Dear Demetrios: Thank you for your kind words. Yes, even the Muse originated from Greek mythology. Aristotle has influenced Western civilsation in more ways than we can ever give due credit. He considered the poetics the sublime elevation of the human spirit. All my best. Leon
Date: 3/11/2014 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem, my friend, worded nicely. Loved always, bl
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/11/2014 10:38:00 PM
Dear BL: Thank you. Glad these verses connected with you. All the best, then. Leon

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