My 1st Bike

The best damn bike - I’d ever seen
Metallic paint - British Racing Green
 
Retro Styled – built for fun, not speed
A fine design – very fine indeed
 
Out for a spin - to the shops and back
In a short time - I’d got the knack
 
Down the hill – wasn’t even trying
But man alive – I was really flying
 
What’s that – a bloody cat!
Waved my arms – shouted "SCAT!"
 
The dumb thing froze – like a dust mop
Yanked on the anchors – rapid stop
 
Slammed down hard – on the cross-bar
White hot pain – testicular trauma
 
Truth be told – I’m no wimp
But to this day – I walk with a limp


[Originally published on my blog on world poetry day]
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Phillips Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 2:57 AM
I love this line "But man alive – I was really flying''very nice realistic piece.I like the wimp...limp contrast. Very beautiful.
Hendricks Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 10:06 AM
lol. I love your phrase "testicular trauma". I sure hope this is a work of fiction, especially the latter part. Nice writing, David. :)
Sollis Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Delysia, I wish it were fiction (the latter part), but it's based on an actual true life experience.
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