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Muzzle Loader

Above my hearth rests a muzzle loader I know not how old. Ah, could it speak, what adventurous tales to be told! Oft I've caressed it and pondered time and again, About where it was made and who its owners might have been! Lewis and Clark may have used it in their daring odyssey, To carry out Jefferson's dream and quest for Manifest Destiny! Could it have been shouldered by Dan'l Boone, that hardy pioneer, In his exploration of Kentucky to expand the western frontier? Could it have reposed above the hearth of a humble cabin abode, Ever ready to keep at bay whatever peril may have bode? I'm sure it was used by a father with all his skill and ardor, To provide provender for his family's ever scanty larder! Perhaps it was fired by a Yank or Reb clashing upon the field of strife, Brother against brother, bent on sending the other to eternal life! Mayhaps a grizzled mountain man of the Rocky Mountain west, Toted it in his quest for beaver fur of which he was obsessed! Maybe it was aboard a Conestoga wagon pulled by plodding teams, And carried by a man heading west to fulfill his family's dreams! I suppose I could attach to it any fanciful tale I might choose, But about its ancient and mysterious past I much prefer to muse! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/13/2011 4:30:00 PM
Wow! Bob h.. i have odd thoughts here... i suppose this is bad... ooo do let me know,,, soup mail me... cause i think my thoughts and comment would have to be based on things like broke back mountain,,, sorry.. if its wrong thought... shame on me..lol... yes and it is better not to know.. how it came about ... ooo i do want to know what your talking about... cause if it is what it is... shame on you... i'm kidding.. smile and take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:36:00 PM
i may be so wrong,, its about gubs,, io read other comments... hope i did not offend your poem,, if i did i can remove comment Bob,... but guns... hummm strange... yes,, but i can see it now after reading this 3 times.. take care...p.d.
Date: 4/12/2011 8:47:00 AM
Been around guns much of my life Bob ..my first hubby was a city cop and then security chief at colleges .. and two of my sons luv the rifle range here... have a 38 myself.. for protection form the big bad wolves of life..haha... only kidding.. I hate violence but luv your poetry my friend.. your great presentations and rhymes delight me to no end... always look forward to your words...luv..
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Date: 4/11/2011 7:56:00 PM
a great piece Robert enjoyed reading it. Yes my wife and I have been to the Springs a lot. we went down there for 5 days back in 2004 and have been to the Sky Sox Games a lot also. since i retired we have not been there. thank you for reading A Rose Fell and for your comment.
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:13:00 PM
Another great offering, Sarge. Enjoyed. Excellent piece. Ralphie
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:23:00 AM
This reminds me of my son and husband they bought a gun yesterday. A mosini nagant russian bolt rifle 7.62 caliper and they have been wondering how/who/when etc. it was used. the date on it is 1943. It was a german killer they decided in WWII.
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Date: 4/10/2011 4:56:00 PM
Line 5 maybe used "it" Oh line 12 is perfection! Bob the meter is just a wee bit off and you could use a few more comma's like after Perhaps & Maybe, the content is delightfully meaty as usual! And the half rhyme is excellent! Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:14:00 AM
Of course I know little about guns but I really enjoyed the flow of your pen writing on the muzzle loader, Bob
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Date: 4/9/2011 8:42:00 PM
A great write dear poet...and how it flowed ! I am a gun enthusiast for sure...this went over well with me sir ! TY for the excitement ! much love, james
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..There probably is someone somewhere that knows where that gun has been or at least where it was made..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2011 2:32:00 PM
a blend of mysteryand love for collectibles, robert... my heart lept as my father had this penchant for guns, he had a closet of them being a general... so enjoyed this crisp, exciting piece! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/9/2011 9:45:00 AM
My husband had a collection of guns he loved. He knew their history however. I passed them on to his son and he immediately sold them for cash. My husband would have been so hurt by that. Great poem. Thanks for your comments. love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:57:00 PM
This is not only funny at times but also very interesting Bob. Some people have a gift called "psychometry" that allows them to know the history of an object when they touch it. I would like to put the muzzle loader in one of their hands and learn more. Good work! Best to you, Diane
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