Mutualism Lost Its Grip

Roses have bloomed colorful, wearing
A symphony of red, white, and pink.
Gardenia and Jasmine pose in white,
Butterflies are fluttering in delight.

Insects are pollinating flowering trees
Devouring nectar, a fee for the service.
Apple flowers, pretty in pink and white.
Purple peach flowers, an enchanting sight.

The fig trees nearby have flowers too
Greenish blossoms hidden from view
The tiny buds, look like fruits indeed!
In fact, they're inverted flowers within.

Flowers' aroma attracts female wasp
Eager to lay eggs, as romance begins
Inside the Syconium of a male flower.
A mutualism yearning for symbiosis.

Baby wasps will soon mature 
The siblings will mate with each other
Wingless males will die, females will fly
In a hurry with the pollen they carry
Searching new male flowers to breed.

Female flowers exude a special scent
Tricking the wasp to shimmy in the stem,
A one way street to death sentence.
Female flowers pollinate, don't reciprocate
No place for the wasp to lay its eggs.
Having lost its wings, it dies for a cause
The flowers in time digest the dead wasp
And grow into a ripened fruit we call fig.
Just this one time, mutualism lost its grip.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/27/2023 6:20:00 AM
Whoa!! What an interesting lifecycle of a certain wasp you have explained to us in poetic form. I enjoyed reading this information. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations on POTD. Sara K
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Date: 2/28/2023 8:20:00 PM
Vijay, I just had to come all the way to your first poem. Might as well start there. I’ve been enjoying reading many of the poets here nightly, and now it’s yours tonight. And wow, your first post here is just as excellent as all of them. Very much enjoying it :)
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Date: 8/20/2022 9:11:00 AM
Vijay, your very start on Poetry Soup is something outstanding. Thus you began your stupendous poetic journey and it is progressing without any hitch . The information about the pollination of the fig tree is something new and interesting.
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Date: 12/30/2020 8:50:00 AM
Love your first post on PS! You delight us with your garden - its colors and blossoms, the posing gardenia and jasmine, payment for service, the sad death of (the hated wasp) needed for producing figs. Who knew?! All creation sings out with possibilities! God bless you, Vijay! Obviously read this for a second time...lol. Delightful!
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Date: 12/21/2020 3:55:00 AM
Love this interesting first poem! Shocked by the invitation of a wasp (no bee) into your write, then the jolt and thought-provoking end! Kudos! Fave
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Date: 11/23/2019 3:15:00 PM
I thought I had posted on your first poem...I remember when you first came and the start of your wonderful poetry.
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Date: 6/28/2019 6:03:00 PM
A great and interesting introduction to poetry soup!
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Date: 11/30/2018 11:02:00 AM
Hi Vijay, it is amazing, the poetic gems one can find when one does go back to the very beginning of a poets writes. This was your start and what a wonderful start it was. I am so glad I came and read this most wonderful write. The creativity was shining from the start my friend. An excellent write. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/22/2018 3:35:00 PM
oh yes, I remember this one, and how surprised i was about the fig!! Gosh, I tried, but can't find a poem to read of yours. I bet there is at least one more somewhere that I never saw!!
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Date: 8/5/2018 2:07:00 PM
Oh my gosh, so the fig I eat is a dead wasp?? This is a very enlightening poem, Vijay, which I found way back here as your first post. So informative yet written in your eloquent style.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/5/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..I had a difficult time writing it.. yes..we eat them.
Date: 1/5/2018 4:37:00 PM
Taking in our first posted on soup, and wow brilliant..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2018 5:21:00 PM
Thank you harry.
Date: 8/4/2017 12:22:00 PM
Very enlightening poem, Vijay. I did not know that about the fig. Still love the fruit though. Wonderful debut, my friend. May love light your path always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much. Your work is quite inspiring.
Date: 7/31/2017 4:54:00 AM
It's great isn't it? Figs and fig-wasps, I think it's a fascinating subject. Metaphorical too. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2017 7:09:00 AM
Appreciate your encouragement. It was difficult to write. Will do better next time. Many thanks.
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