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Mute hues of dusk gone, still ‘cept for clerid Sight is slight, sloe murk taunts with ‘a whisper Shadows come creeping, silence grows trepid Twilight so stark, not ‘beam of pale lunar Seeps through this chill shroud of ritual arcane Sight is slight, sloe murk taunts with ‘a whisper My thoughts become smart as my wisdom fades No sense or viscera to ‘vert brae’k bone Seeps through this chill shroud of ritual arcane I lone am the wolf whose fangs turned to stone Close my feigned eyes, yearn for glimpse of sea green No sense or viscera to ‘vert brae’k bone Barren confines for this degrade machine No solace comes for a soul like me..... so Close my feigned eyes, yearn for glimpse of sea green I spied too late what I chose to forgo Mute hues of dusk gone, still ‘cept for clerid No solace comes for a soul like me….. so Shadows come creeping….. silence grows trepid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2015 11:08:00 PM
VICTORIA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
VICTORIA, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:12:00 AM
This is a lovely piece, Victoria, and worthy of a contest win on your first attempt. Jolly well done, young lady. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Viv x
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Victoria Wood
Date: 7/24/2015 7:12:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 7/24/2015 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Victoria!
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Victoria Wood
Date: 7/24/2015 7:12:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 7/23/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, the only rule breaker was the title, which I didn't catch until after it posted, but your poem was very descriptive, nicely done
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Victoria Wood
Date: 7/24/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thank you for creating it! will know about the title next time ;)
Date: 7/23/2015 3:07:00 PM
many congrats on your win Victoria - I do love imagery and the form you have used to write this powerful poem :-) hugs jan xx
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Victoria Wood
Date: 7/24/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thank you and congrats! I absolutely loved the realism of your poem it really struck a chord. I look forward to reading more in the future :) xx
Date: 7/15/2015 5:59:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome! I look forward to reading more of everyones work! I'm new to writing poetry so feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated :)
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:17:00 AM
Victoria, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:08:00 PM
Victoria, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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