Mute

Silence wraps itself around my senses
Soundless visions tiptoe through my mind
In my world, sound has been suspended
I hear your voice only with my eyes
And quietly, with my hands I speak

lifefree verse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 7, 2012 at 5:52 AM

Belated congratulations to you on your win in Brian's "Four To Fourteen" contest Bob. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

February 7, 2012 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Carol

Bl Devnath

February 6, 2012 at 8:54 AM

Your pen talks sweetly, loved my sweet friend. Enjoyed much and much. Congrats on your win, bl

Bob Quigley

February 6, 2012 at 11:01 AM

Thank you very much bl. I appreciate your comments.

Samual Ronthorpe

February 5, 2012 at 12:25 AM

Very nice work and well deserving of a win. Congrats and keep up the good work................S. Ronthorpe

Bob Quigley

February 5, 2012 at 8:10 AM

Thank you Samual. A appreciate your comments

Glenn Sentes

February 4, 2012 at 8:24 PM

cONGRATULATIONS on your powerful win, Bob! Keep inspiring! =)

Bob Quigley

February 4, 2012 at 10:58 PM

Many thanks Glenn

Christopher Bunton

February 3, 2012 at 3:48 PM

Congratulations, Very Good! Felt it!

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 9:41 PM

Thank you Christopher

Greg Stanley

February 3, 2012 at 11:31 AM

A wonderful piece and written so well, deserved for 1st place, a big congratulations to you, Greg

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 11:49 AM

Thanks very much Greg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 3, 2012 at 8:44 AM

many congrats Bob on a superb win for first place.. extraordinary lines luv..

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 8:48 AM

Many thanks Linda-Marie

Jon Arno

February 3, 2012 at 6:52 AM

Congratulations on a fantastic write Bob. You gave us a great write. Jon

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 8:18 AM

Thank you Jon

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 3, 2012 at 5:59 AM

Congratulations again Bob xx

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 8:21 AM

Thank you Mandy

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 3, 2012 at 5:45 AM

Congrats on taking first place with this winner!! Blessings, Rhonda:)

Bob Quigley

February 3, 2012 at 8:21 AM

I appreciate that Rhonda

Robert Pettit

January 28, 2012 at 11:06 PM

This reminds me of an hour-long episode of the Twilight Zone which had the same title. Actress Ann Jillian appeared there as a little girl named Ilsa. These five lines are very descriptive.

Bob Quigley

January 29, 2012 at 8:02 AM

I would have liked to see that. I was a big Twilight Zone fan.