Mute

Silence wraps itself around my senses Soundless visions tiptoe through my mind In my world, sound has been suspended I hear your voice only with my eyes And quietly, with my hands I speak

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 5:52:00 AM

Belated congratulations to you on your win in Brian's "Four To Fourteen" contest Bob. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/7/2012 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/6/2012 8:54:00 AM

Your pen talks sweetly, loved my sweet friend. Enjoyed much and much. Congrats on your win, bl

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 11:01:00 AM

Thank you very much bl. I appreciate your comments.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 12:25:00 AM

Very nice work and well deserving of a win. Congrats and keep up the good work................S. Ronthorpe

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/5/2012 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Samual. A appreciate your comments

Glenn Sentes

Date: 2/4/2012 8:24:00 PM

cONGRATULATIONS on your powerful win, Bob! Keep inspiring! =)

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 10:58:00 PM

Many thanks Glenn

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/3/2012 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations, Very Good! Felt it!

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 9:41:00 PM

Thank you Christopher

Greg Stanley

Date: 2/3/2012 11:31:00 AM

A wonderful piece and written so well, deserved for 1st place, a big congratulations to you, Greg

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 11:49:00 AM

Thanks very much Greg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2012 8:44:00 AM

many congrats Bob on a superb win for first place.. extraordinary lines luv..

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 8:48:00 AM

Many thanks Linda-Marie

Jon Arno

Date: 2/3/2012 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on a fantastic write Bob. You gave us a great write. Jon

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Jon

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2012 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations again Bob xx

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Mandy

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/3/2012 5:45:00 AM

Congrats on taking first place with this winner!! Blessings, Rhonda:)

Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 8:21:00 AM

I appreciate that Rhonda

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2012 11:06:00 PM

This reminds me of an hour-long episode of the Twilight Zone which had the same title. Actress Ann Jillian appeared there as a little girl named Ilsa. These five lines are very descriptive.

Bob Quigley
Date: 1/29/2012 8:02:00 AM

I would have liked to see that. I was a big Twilight Zone fan.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2012 3:57:00 PM

I could feel the emotions of a person who was deaf when reading this one..Very expressive one indeed..Enjoyed..Sara

Bob Quigley
Date: 1/27/2012 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Sara