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~Mustangs Are Born Free~ (Monchielle) Let wild horses run free In mountains let them be Release them let them go Stop killing these horses They are so scared you know. Let wild horses run free Don't divide mom from baby Wild horses to be free Let them run in mountain Don't take freedom away. Let wild horses run free Let's join voices help horses Take them where they belong They truly need our help Selling these horses wrong. Let wild horses run free Since small I love horses I grew up watch them grow Mustangs are beautiful They're unique smart you know. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 May.28.2015
Authors notes: The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/29/2015 8:32:00 AM
I love horses and this great poem. The word mustang evokes images of freedom to me. What would a cowboy be without a horse!? A7 on this fine poem..
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Robert,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Date: 5/28/2015 12:24:00 PM
I agree with you Dorian; wild horses are meant to be free. Let us not break their hearts. // paul
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 12:22:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Paul,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it my dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Date: 5/28/2015 3:40:00 AM
- Let them always be free .....- A great poem Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Anne Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it my dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you! Hugs!:)D.
Date: 5/27/2015 11:43:00 PM
Hear, hear! Great write, Dorian. Viv x
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 12:20:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Viv,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Date: 5/27/2015 10:43:00 PM
Brilliant write, I love this horse , since I was young. Enjoyed
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Skat A,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it,dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

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