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Must Go To the Sea

Folks called her Molly and she was crying now She was deep in sorrow with a furrowed brow An alabaster cross hung around her neck Salvaged from rolling surf in that deadly wreck Her left hand held the last rose of the season While her love lay dead - the sea was the reason Careless she stood on this old bridge made of rust As sailors below went to sea as they must She had watched as the storm had turned the clouds to scud And the azure water had turned to brown mud The storm had killed her man on the rocks just there And her wedding plans had gone aground somewhere She could hear her father," If wed you must be - Do not wed a man who must go to the sea." 3-28-19 Contest:Specificity in Poetry Sponsor:Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 5/2/2019 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention finish, Larry, good details providing the sorrowful loss of a husband after a stormy shipwreck, enjoyed reading it.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/2/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/29/2019 11:31:00 PM
I really like this one. It's like a little sad story and with so much feeling and your rhyming couplets are great. My only question is about the title: did you accidentally leave out the word, "Go"? Good luck to you in the contest, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/29/2019 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, Carole.I missed it completely and have corrected it. Makes a world of difference. If I win I'll split the prize with you..LOL

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