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Musings On Shakespeare's Sonnet 73

Some parts of life are permanent, alas, some aspects not: The morning temperature feels chill; by midday it grows hot. The money spent on cell phones' long-term value which I sought, Too soon is gone, as more is spent on upgrades I've since bought. The sun in its celestial course yields light, black night, or shade. Old years tossed out with calendars as fire's embers fade. Some friendships evanesce, forgetting promises we'd made Our children grow and move away, as hair grows thinned and greyed. Staunch boughs of trees are shaken by harsh winds, enduring long. 'That time of year thou mayest in me behold'; thy love's more strong. You've been my life's sweet constant as we harmonize our song - One truth is undeniable: in your arms I belong.
// Dedicated to Janet, my loving bride of 35 years //
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:21 PM
What a treasure of a gift for your Janet. This is such a beautiful romantic poem. Your wife is a lucky lady and I am sure that you feel very lucky too. I am Faving this John. It is so beautiful! Congratulations on your anniversary! Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Connie. My heart is always filled to the brim when a poet of your caliber (and dear friend) comments so warmly! You are a treasure. I am indeed a lucky man to be married to such a wonderful woman. Thank you for the fave and wonderful words of encouragement! ~ John
Radice Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 2:26 AM
Love this John. A very clever write. The themes of growing older and the strength of real love are explored by use of metaphors: Autumn / winter (boughs of trees shaken by harsh winds), the passing of time (calenders) and dying of a fire (embers) Great read.
Watt Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thank you for the deep read, Gary. Loved your comment, glad you enjoyed it.
Kauffman Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 10:23 PM
Back to say congratulations on your win! Well deserved. Blessings my friend!
Watt Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Sam!
Wolf Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Janet surely loves this beautiful poem you've crafted, John. Tender, touching, and true... Wonderful! ~ Gershon
Watt Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Yes, you're right Gershon, she did love it. She loves attending Shakespeare plays then afterwards explaining to me everything I missed! Thank you for the kind words, my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 6:57 PM
A beautifully rendered poem. A wonderful dedication to your wife, John:-) "Sonnet 73" happens to be one of my favorite Shakespeare poems!
Watt Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:49 PM
Always nice to know of other lovers of Shakespeare's sonnets, Edward! Number 73 is a beauty, up there in my 3 faves of his.
Kauffman Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 6:44 PM
It is a wonderful thing to know that husbands still write tender poems to their wives (of 35 years!) I love the humor in the beggining that merges into the more serious part of the verse. Great contrast and flow! Congrats on your first place win! Blessing to both of you!
Watt Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Thank you for the blessings, Sam! I am grateful for your constant support and encouragement. Janet loves Shakespeare, so this one was well received.
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 5:02 PM
well deserved win, my friend. Mine did not fare so well!! NOW I'm off (finally) Had to write down all the contests I need to work on this evening!
Watt Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Thank you for the congrats. Hope you have fun writing today!
Faulkner Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:48 AM
This is worthy of Shakespeare himself! At my wedding, we had a reading of Sonnet 116 'let me not to the marriage of true minds..' but I love this one, as it is about how love, like wine, grows deeper and more nuanced over time. Congratulations on 35 years with your lovely bride!
Watt Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 6:51 PM
How nice to know you had 116 read at your wedding! It is so beautiful, and one of my 3 favorites of his (29, 73, 116), though many others are near misses. He was why I fell in love with the sonnet form many years ago. Honestly, I enjoy his sonnets much more than his plays... how very lowbrow of me! Thanks for the kind words, I hope you can meet my bride sometime when you visit!
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:37 PM
ahhhh, how sweet , a tribute and not just to a sonnet but to your wife. This had better place well!!!!
Watt Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 9:55 PM
Thank you for the kind words, my friend. She still inspires me.
Warrior Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:29 PM
A lovely dedication to your wife Johnny Watts...happy 35 years my dear friend...a fav for the both of you...I'm sure she is just as great as you are-maybe better lol...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
Watt Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, Wings. She's a peach alright! JW
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