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Musings of Love

You sent shivers down my spine,
In the glorious knowledge you were mine.

You touched my heart with your soulful voice.
Ever glad you and I made the right choice.

The sight of you walking toward me on the street,
My heart pulsed with an almighty beat.

The gut-wrenching ache was filled with despair,
When I knew you should be, but you weren't there.

I trembled when our lips met in a passionate kiss.
That sensuous feeling, I never wanted to miss.

When you took me in your arms to hold me tight,
I experienced all the sensation of a lover’s delight.

Restful feeling, I had when we lay together at night.
Weary from the day’s work we had put out of sight.

Our bodies in slumber gently entwined.
Waking with feeling of ecstasy overwhelmed my mind.

I knew another like you I could never find.
So strong and masterful yet gentle and kind.

When we laughed together it was as if we were one.
Joined in happiness having so much fun.

When you needed me, I enjoyed helping you.
Working together as if that's what we were meant to do.

When you were hurt the darkest surge within me to pray.
That our dear Lord would take your pain away.

You completed me and made me whole; you were my light.
My darling you are within me, though I am without you tonight.
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Date: 2/20/2024 2:38:00 PM
Hi wen did you find it offensive that i pointed out your typo in the poem? I did not mean to offend you by any means. Usually i dont place poems with typos but it wasnt the case for you. You can point out my typos in my poems. Not typos i make in comments. I make many typos in my comments as i use my phone to comment and i am always multitasking when im commenting on poems. So please feel free to point out typos in my poems not comments. Cheers
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:50:00 PM
Ummm You may not know this Empress, but I have a catch cry, A friend is a spell checker ! I consider it a friendly thing . "Happy with my placing and more happy with your lovely comment :)" Does this sound like I was offended ?" Sorry I didn't know there was a situation allowed to point out and a situation not allowed. I am learning. I am one of those people that never understands people getting upset with CAPS or with friends helping out, pointing out stuff. I am sorry you did, I would never mean to upset you. I am truly sorry that I told you about your typo. I promise never to do it again Empress. You must know I hold you in high regard. Well I thought you did. Again please accept my sincere apologies for letting you know of a typo in a place that I wasn't supposed to tell you about. I can only hope I haven't offended others in the past by doing this. I honestly didn't know the rules.
Date: 2/20/2024 5:43:00 AM
Dear SV, beautiful cadence and rhythm to your well woven words, i read this twice and i was just in awe captivated by the beauty of your word weaving and the depth of what youv expressed and described here truly speaks volumes! Your name “ speaks volumes” suits you as your ink does speak volumes to the readers soul and heart, i loved the ending the most but theres a tiny typo, which i think was autocorrect “ i am without yiur tonight” otherwise this woukd have placed higher, congratulations.
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Date: 2/20/2024 12:50:00 PM
Hi empress, just a heads up, you might wanna fix a tiny typo in your comment to Sara's poem. I think you meant writing: writint .. Cheers Wen <3
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Date: 2/20/2024 8:38:00 AM
Thanx Empress, glad you liked it. If I had a dollar for every time I have typed your for you.. and you when I meant your, I would be rich. .lol I usually pick it up, but even in my re-through, it went unnoticed. Happy with my placing and more happy with your lovely comment :)
Date: 2/16/2024 6:30:00 AM
These are just the sweetest, most romantic words I've read recently Wen. Lovely as you are, my friend! :)
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Date: 2/16/2024 12:17:00 PM
Awe Linda, you make me feel all warm and fuzzy. Thank you my friend. I think if anything, our tired old love got rekindled when we both got sick. The caring got deeper because all of a sudden we needed each other more. Strange the way things happen. Thanks for your lovely words my sweet friend. Take care Luv Wen.
Date: 2/13/2024 4:41:00 AM
You are beautifully paired and your couplets too. In the image, you both look almost alike....! From where did you choose the picture of such a matching pair? "You completed me and made me whole; you were my light. My darling you are within me, though I am without you tonight." These lines perfectly conclude this beautifully romantic poem. All the Best dear Wendy!
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Date: 2/13/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Valsa for your lovely comment. I use PlaygroundAI.com for my images. its a free-online Image maker with thousands of images to choose from. If you try it, be very specific with what you want. Example: boy wearing a red top riding a blue bike on a lonely road. It will search until it finds choices that are most similar to what you asked for. I have been using it for a year. My protection always tells me its safe. All the best to you Valsa from Wen. I tried to soup mail this to you but it isn't working.
Date: 2/12/2024 11:01:00 AM
Romantic, sensual, and real love poem. Good job.
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Date: 2/12/2024 4:23:00 PM
Thank you dear Jay. Appreciated. Luv Wen
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