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Musings of a Troubled Soul

Will this be the last poem I ever write Will I be drafted in the morning to fight A fearsome enemy by dark of night Or might I awaken to see I've lost my sight... Will the sun come up like it's supposed to do Will the heavens turn jet-black instead of blue Will the temperature soar well past forty-two* Will a wall of humidity mean hopes eschewed... Sure this could be the last poem ever I pen Yet the Lord might keep me around 'til 110 So I lay me down tonight, put my trust in His Grace That I'll wake up tomorrow with a smile on my face *42 degrees Celsius = 107.6 degrees Fahrenheit

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Date: 6/27/2020 12:54:00 PM
That's all we can do, well worded.
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Date: 6/27/2020 5:16:00 AM
I hope if he keeps you around until 110 that he keeps your HEALTH terrific as well. Chuckle. Chuckle. I have never thought "what if this is the last one?" Hmmmm I might now.
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Date: 6/26/2020 2:00:00 PM
Anything left in God's hands is likely to slip through the Old Man's fingers! Aloha! Rico
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 2:09:00 PM
Pretty funny comment. Gave me a nice chuckle, (even though I very much disagree). Happy Friday, Rico.
Date: 6/26/2020 10:44:00 AM
Trusting Him--that's all we can do, Gershon. This skillfully-written, emotional poem is moving and descriptive. Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Janice. Here's to you, and Keep the Faith! :) Gershon
Date: 6/26/2020 10:11:00 AM
I too sometimes wonder what will be the last poem I write. With God I know that I will have eternity beyond this plane of existence. Blessings to you Gershon. Thanks for your visit.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:15:00 PM
Your poems are so good, Richard, that each and every one could qualify as a 'What a way to go out!' As for me, I'm more of a gambler. lol. Thanks, Gershon
Date: 6/26/2020 7:17:00 AM
You were trained very well, Gershon! I read this, and all I Coukd think of was Modeh Ani! Temps here have been in the hundreds for days. Central Air, staying indoors saves me! Great verse...,PR xo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:14:00 PM
There you go, Modeh Ani every morning! Here's to some lower temperatures on the West Coast! Joy and Light, Gershon
Date: 6/26/2020 4:07:00 AM
Your faith will conquer all your fears. 42°C, that's hot, real hot, had that in Turkey once, I nearly cooked. Cold beer saved the day lol. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/27/2020 6:17:00 AM
I'm Anglo saxon, born for the cold lol
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:13:00 PM
22 -- just right for you... 32 -- a little warm for you... 42 --- Hellish! Whew!
Date: 6/26/2020 2:31:00 AM
ah yes 'grace'....i used to dream about her....even thanked god for the memories …...stan sand : )
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:11:00 PM
grace must have been quite edgy to have no capital letter G at the start of her name...
Date: 6/25/2020 11:23:00 PM
Your poem inspires and illustrates how faith keep fears at bay. It also brings fond memories of the first prayer I ever learned. Great poem and great rhyming. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:11:00 PM
I also pray the Lord your soul to --- return, Evelyn! Peace and Joy, Gershon

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