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Musical Fate

I heard your music playing, outside the door It took me to a place I haven’t been before I went to leave and followed the tune This beautiful sunny day, at high noon Then I was standing in the sunlight, caught by your smile I swear it could have carried me a mile I was talking to a stranger, strumming his guitar Our smiles flashing back and forth, never going far Chorus Suddenly, I had no-where to go, nothing to do But stand in a parking lot, talking to you That’s right, I had no-where to go, nothing to do It was musical fate, making plans, with a musician like you _______ Your eyes were filled with stars so bright I would’ve followed you into a moonless night Your voice was so familiar, but new So soothing in the warm air, as I listened to you Singing, moving, strumming your guitar While I stood watching on the way to my car Your eyes never left me, your smile never did fade It was that moment, this memory was made Chorus Suddenly I had no-where to go, nothing to do But stand in the parking lot, talking to you That’s right, I had no-where to go, nothing to do It was musical fate, making plans, with a musician like you Heidi Sands 9/11/23

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/24/2023 1:12:00 PM

What a beautiful moment in time, created while the music played. It was "musical fate"! Beautiful lyrics, for the perfect song. Enjoy the moment Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2023 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sandy :)

Silent One

Date: 9/16/2023 9:04:00 AM

This is so lovely.. you had me singing along.. great chorus..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I am happy to hear that. So nice to see you here my friend. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/16/2023 5:36:00 AM

Heidi, your dream-like musical romance makes for a beautiful song! With a rhythmic flow, it lilts off the lips!! I really enjoyed reading this morning!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2023 5:47:00 AM

Wow thank you so much Mike. I am happy you enjoyed this! Happy Saturday XXoo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 1:29:00 AM

Lovely lyric, Heidi, guitar has that special romantic effect, I think:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Joanna. Nice to hear from you :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2023 8:26:00 PM

This is wonderful, Heidi. I'm strumming and humming along! Blessings and a little Luck too, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. Keep on strumming, humming and writing :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/13/2023 9:46:00 AM

Hitting the right notes to find this musical connection, Wonderful verse Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2023 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/12/2023 5:49:00 PM

Oh, Heidi. you should look for a collaborator to put music to your wonderful lyrics.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2023 6:03:00 PM

I write music too Jerry. I play piano. If I can make the time with things going on, I will try to put the music to these. I haven't been playing lately. But, I have put a few songs here in the past. Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/12/2023 3:40:00 PM

Hello Heidi, these are beautiful words for a song. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2023 2:35:00 PM

Hello Heidi, you are welcome. Hugs./Darlene\

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2023 3:44:00 PM

Thank you very much Darlene. I appreciate your support. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/12/2023 5:42:00 AM

Another delightful poem my friend. Its romantic voice strums music of love. A lovely story and an awesome chorus. Another FAVE from me, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2023 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay. I couldn't get this one exactly how I wanted it , so I just posted it as is. I am happy you like it and I am thrilled you consider it a Fave! I hope you have a nice day today :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/11/2023 8:02:00 PM

Oh how sweet! Caught by his smile is breathtaking. Great lyrics, Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2023 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Akkina. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/11/2023 3:17:00 PM

This music man has her swept off her feet. Was it the voice, the eyes, or both? Nice lyrics Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2023 3:49:00 PM

LoL I think for her it was all 3, smile , voice , eyes. Thanks Tom :)