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When life is like an evanescent dewdrop, spirits fade like ashes in a cimmerian shade but then you smile, enlightening like a crescent moon, sparkling in silent serenity. My heart floats like a sussuration of butterflies, soaring toward an empyrean paradise of petals yearning to stay for eternity then you speak, serenading like a harmonic orchestra of angels, suddenly I feel like a blissful bard, strumming strings of a heavenly harp. My radiant beloved, my soul glitters for you, like a million devoted stars, sparkling in twilight aurora. Your voice is my sweetest abode, a soothing sanctuary, cleansing my sins, healing like fragrant Jasmine, dulcifying my heart, Upon my final swan song sonnet, do not shed a tear, for our love is timeless. Sing me one last lover's lullaby, even in death, your voice will be music to my ears.
Silent One 10 February 2019

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Date: 3/7/2019 5:00:00 AM
You smile like crescent moon, beautiful written
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:43:00 AM
Of no sense, scent or taste, everything in life is without love! In love, we have peace.. harmony.. pain.. gain.. joy.. growth and rebirth.. An exquisite poem! Amazing song! Beauty to my heart! Definitely a FAV. Always a great pleasure to read your fascinating poetry Silent One. My deepest regards. Blessings.
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Date: 2/16/2019 7:24:00 PM
Music truly can take you to places beyond the sky. The magic of the melody is simply breathtaking indeed. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/13/2019 11:56:00 AM
Your poem is music to my ears. Blessing.
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Date: 2/11/2019 4:13:00 PM
Wonderful golden poetry..
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Date: 2/11/2019 3:59:00 PM
Romantic expressions of love sometimes sound so much better when expressed through poetry, S1, and this is one such example! That's when a reader's heart floats! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/11/2019 9:45:00 AM
You've certainly set a high standard with this one S.O. as usual a brilliant write from your pen. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 2/11/2019 9:32:00 AM
Silent, oh this is a beautiful poem and great example for your contest, and I just love the music too !
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Date: 2/11/2019 5:19:00 AM
Such a lovely poetry. Amazing imagery. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/10/2019 11:27:00 PM
As always your poems never fail to astound.Your marvelous work of poetic artistry with rich vibrant lines were beautifully expressed. Sad ending though. Always a Fave....Maria hugs
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Date: 2/10/2019 10:05:00 PM
Such a sad ending. ... but to have met that one person in a lifetime who makes your “soul glitter” is a rare blessing. As always amazing poet ... brilliant!!
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Date: 2/10/2019 7:55:00 PM
this one is dripping with sweet words, Silent one. Some really great lines in this poem. Thanks for your last contest and the inspiration.
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Date: 2/10/2019 5:46:00 PM
Your words are timeless as the sun, and the music, well that is icing on the cake Si, xo
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Date: 2/10/2019 4:52:00 PM
Wow. I understand how you feel but I could never find the words to so vividly describe my feelings. Great.
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Date: 2/10/2019 3:53:00 PM
Just incredible!! I love this so much. It is truly "music to my ears" as well. The beauty of true love in words only the greatest poet (you!) could write...FAVED of course!
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 3:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Carole....
Date: 2/10/2019 3:48:00 PM
Your romantic poem shows love's power to lift hearts and inspire creative thought, Silent One. A wonderful read, especially timely as Valentine's Day approaches! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn.. I am not the biggest fan of valentines day though, do not do commercialised days... Best wishes.
Date: 2/10/2019 11:56:00 AM
Silent One, if you ever think of changing anything about this poem, please do not. Especially change nothing about this part, for it is perfectly written: "My radiant beloved, my soul glitters for you, like a million devoted stars, sparkling in twilight aurora. Your voice is my sweetest abode, a soothing sanctuary, cleansing my sins, healing like fragrant Jasmine, dulcifying my heart."
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Caren, I only change poems if there is an error.. Normally, I leave them and forget about them..
Date: 2/10/2019 11:46:00 AM
Hi Silent, this is another exceptional piece. Your poetry sings in this free verse form, your poetry should never have the restriction of form. You sing with such deep emotions, poetry that enters the heart with ease. Such beautiful words painting such beautiful images. Let your heart sing out my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Mike for your support and kind words..
Date: 2/10/2019 11:16:00 AM
Such a whimsical image - suddenly I feel like a blissful bard, strumming strings of a heavenly harp. Romantic.
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:36:00 PM
Everyone should feel like a blissful bard... Thanks you Kim
Date: 2/10/2019 10:59:00 AM
I can hear the symphonic strings in your poem, and when I get off the computer, I shall look for music to play for me and my memories.
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:36:00 PM
I hope you found some... Thanks.
Date: 2/10/2019 10:43:00 AM
Some serious loving going on here...pure heart....
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Date: 2/10/2019 8:53:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting! <3 xomo
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 2/10/2019 8:39:00 AM
This is excellent. Your writing is beautiful! Well written Silent One :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 2/10/2019 7:57:00 AM
This is so smooth like floating through the air, excellent my friend!
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Bobby..
Date: 2/10/2019 7:38:00 AM
WOW! What a journey this is through your enchanting poetic world..I certainly enjoyed the read. Great emotions in precious words..so well written, SO.
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, this poem just came to me this morning.. I am thinking about having 'music to my ears', as my next contest theme..

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