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Music To My Ears

When life is like an evanescent dewdrop, spirits fade like ashes in a cimmerian shade but then you smile, enlightening like a crescent moon, sparkling in silent serenity. My heart floats like a sussuration of butterflies, soaring toward an empyrean paradise of petals yearning to stay for eternity then you speak, serenading like a harmonic orchestra of angels, suddenly I feel like a blissful bard, strumming strings of a heavenly harp. My radiant beloved, my soul glitters for you, like a million devoted stars, sparkling in twilight aurora. Your voice is my sweetest abode, a soothing sanctuary, cleansing my sins, healing like fragrant Jasmine, dulcifying my heart, Upon my final swan song sonnet, do not shed a tear, for our love is timeless. Sing me one last lover's lullaby, even in death, your voice will be music to my ears.
Silent One 10 February 2019
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Jangid Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 5:00 AM
You smile like crescent moon, beautiful written
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Of no sense, scent or taste, everything in life is without love! In love, we have peace.. harmony.. pain.. gain.. joy.. growth and rebirth.. An exquisite poem! Amazing song! Beauty to my heart! Definitely a FAV. Always a great pleasure to read your fascinating poetry Silent One. My deepest regards. Blessings.
Nicole Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Music truly can take you to places beyond the sky. The magic of the melody is simply breathtaking indeed. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy
Dutta Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Your poem is music to my ears. Blessing.
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Wonderful golden poetry..
Callus Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Romantic expressions of love sometimes sound so much better when expressed through poetry, S1, and this is one such example! That's when a reader's heart floats! Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:45 AM
You've certainly set a high standard with this one S.O. as usual a brilliant write from your pen. Hope you're well. Tom
La France Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Silent, oh this is a beautiful poem and great example for your contest, and I just love the music too !
Kannan Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 5:19 AM
Such a lovely poetry. Amazing imagery. Enjoyed it.
Williams Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:27 PM
As always your poems never fail to astound.Your marvelous work of poetic artistry with rich vibrant lines were beautifully expressed. Sad ending though. Always a Fave....Maria hugs
S     Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Such a sad ending. ... but to have met that one person in a lifetime who makes your “soul glitter” is a rare blessing. As always amazing poet ... brilliant!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 7:55 PM
this one is dripping with sweet words, Silent one. Some really great lines in this poem. Thanks for your last contest and the inspiration.
Rose  Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Your words are timeless as the sun, and the music, well that is icing on the cake Si, xo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Wow. I understand how you feel but I could never find the words to so vividly describe my feelings. Great.
Duet Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Just incredible!! I love this so much. It is truly "music to my ears" as well. The beauty of true love in words only the greatest poet (you!) could write...FAVED of course!
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you for your kind words Carole....
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Your romantic poem shows love's power to lift hearts and inspire creative thought, Silent One. A wonderful read, especially timely as Valentine's Day approaches! Best wishes, Carolyn
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Carolyn.. I am not the biggest fan of valentines day though, do not do commercialised days... Best wishes.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Silent One, if you ever think of changing anything about this poem, please do not. Especially change nothing about this part, for it is perfectly written: "My radiant beloved, my soul glitters for you, like a million devoted stars, sparkling in twilight aurora. Your voice is my sweetest abode, a soothing sanctuary, cleansing my sins, healing like fragrant Jasmine, dulcifying my heart."
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Caren, I only change poems if there is an error.. Normally, I leave them and forget about them..
Raven Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Hi Silent, this is another exceptional piece. Your poetry sings in this free verse form, your poetry should never have the restriction of form. You sing with such deep emotions, poetry that enters the heart with ease. Such beautiful words painting such beautiful images. Let your heart sing out my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Mike for your support and kind words..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:16 AM
Such a whimsical image - suddenly I feel like a blissful bard, strumming strings of a heavenly harp. Romantic.
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Everyone should feel like a blissful bard... Thanks you Kim
Wanter Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:59 AM
I can hear the symphonic strings in your poem, and when I get off the computer, I shall look for music to play for me and my memories.
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:36 PM
I hope you found some... Thanks.
Michael Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Some serious loving going on here...pure heart....
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Absolutely enchanting! <3 xomo
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:37 PM
Thanks..
Sands Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:39 AM
This is excellent. Your writing is beautiful! Well written Silent One :)
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Heidi..
May Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 7:57 AM
This is so smooth like floating through the air, excellent my friend!
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you Bobby..
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 7:38 AM
WOW! What a journey this is through your enchanting poetic world..I certainly enjoyed the read. Great emotions in precious words..so well written, SO.
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Vijay, this poem just came to me this morning.. I am thinking about having 'music to my ears', as my next contest theme..
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