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Music of the Night

Elated in rhapsody of this romantic night Merrily I float on the wings of your heart Holding your hands, waltzing by your side Eager to wallow in fantasy of our dreams Strumming the strings of musical harmony In ecstasy of symphony you wrote for me— My love, I yield, to allure of your melody. June 24, 2020 Placed 2nd: On Broadway Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Theme #1: Music of the night

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Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2022 8:13:00 AM

All around me, I hear the lilts of a heavenly symphony or rhapsody. From all corners the melody entices me creating a feel of romantic love.... Beautiful Vijay !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2021 7:09:00 AM

The simplicity of a dance. All the romance.

James Inman

Date: 8/25/2020 6:17:00 PM

A wonderful, loving write Vijay.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2020 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "Merrily I float on the wings of your heart." A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day......................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2020 12:31:00 PM

Dreamy, romantic music of the night, Vijay. So well done. Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings to you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 1:17:00 PM

Much appreciate Sam--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2020 9:55:00 AM

Your interpretation of this prompt is excellent, Vijay. I expect this to go to the top of the list! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2020 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/28/2020 12:58:00 AM

Perfect for the contest Vijay. This is sure to score. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2020 9:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/27/2020 12:28:00 PM

'The allure of your melody' - how romantic, this so conveys the dark beauty of night music, should do well in the contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 1:26:00 PM

Much appreciate Michelle--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/26/2020 10:42:00 PM

wow... this is beautiful Vijay...one can tell it flows from a heart filled with love... best wishes in the contest my friend... hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 11:11:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/26/2020 2:38:00 PM

Captured by her love...A nice little piece of poetry here

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/25/2020 10:56:00 PM

Your heart is drifting in the clouds. You are holding love so close- the love of your life. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 6:39:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Brandy.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/25/2020 4:13:00 PM

Another masterpiece, Vijay--such beautiful, romantic metaphors! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 4:55:00 PM

Much appreciate, Janice, your kind remarks--many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2020 9:44:00 AM

Wonderful write Vijay, but that's what we expect from you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:45:00 PM

So nice to hear--much appreciate, John--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2020 7:22:00 AM

LOVE this. so amazing. A miracle of the poetic mind !!! Wow

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:45:00 PM

Much appreciate, Gina--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/25/2020 5:25:00 AM

Melodious romantic poem that fills the heart with tenderness and Love, my friend, Vijay. Superb writing!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:45:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/25/2020 2:08:00 AM

Strumming the strings of musical harmony.. Beautifully crafted poem.. Great Entry.. Good Luck Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2020 6:15:00 PM

you did this JUST RIGHT, Vijay. YOu truly captured the song's essence.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:43:00 PM

So nice to hear--much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/24/2020 6:05:00 PM

A romantic rhapsody Vijay, Well penned..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:43:00 PM

Many thanks Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/24/2020 5:20:00 PM

I can hear the music thanks to your well orchestrated words. They give me great pleasure to read, Have a great day Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:43:00 PM

So nice to hear my friend--much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/24/2020 4:55:00 PM

You rose to the challenge well with this romantic verse Vijay. Good luck Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2020 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Tom--much appreciate.