Music of the Night

Elated in rhapsody of this romantic night
Merrily I float on the wings of your heart
Holding your hands, waltzing by your side
Eager to wallow in fantasy of our dreams
Strumming the strings of musical harmony
In ecstasy of symphony you wrote for me—
My love, I yield, to allure of your melody.

June 24, 2020
Placed 2nd: On Broadway Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Theme #1: Music of the night
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George Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:13 AM
All around me, I hear the lilts of a heavenly symphony or rhapsody. From all corners the melody entices me creating a feel of romantic love.... Beautiful Vijay !
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 7:09 AM
The simplicity of a dance. All the romance.
Inman Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:17 PM
A wonderful, loving write Vijay.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "Merrily I float on the wings of your heart." A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day......................
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Dreamy, romantic music of the night, Vijay. So well done. Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings to you!
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Much appreciate Sam--many thanks.
Callus Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Your interpretation of this prompt is excellent, Vijay. I expect this to go to the top of the list! Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Perfect for the contest Vijay. This is sure to score. Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.
Faulkner Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:28 PM
'The allure of your melody' - how romantic, this so conveys the dark beauty of night music, should do well in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Much appreciate Michelle--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Adams Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:42 PM
wow... this is beautiful Vijay...one can tell it flows from a heart filled with love... best wishes in the contest my friend... hugs
Pandit Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.
Michael Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Captured by her love...A nice little piece of poetry here
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 10:56 PM
Your heart is drifting in the clouds. You are holding love so close- the love of your life. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Brandy.
Canerdy Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Another masterpiece, Vijay--such beautiful, romantic metaphors! Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Much appreciate, Janice, your kind remarks--many thanks.
Hamilton Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Wonderful write Vijay, but that's what we expect from you!
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:45 PM
So nice to hear--much appreciate, John--many thanks.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 7:22 AM
LOVE this. so amazing. A miracle of the poetic mind !!! Wow
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Much appreciate, Gina--many thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Melodious romantic poem that fills the heart with tenderness and Love, my friend, Vijay. Superb writing!
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Somadas Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Strumming the strings of musical harmony.. Beautifully crafted poem.. Great Entry.. Good Luck Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 6:15 PM
you did this JUST RIGHT, Vijay. YOu truly captured the song's essence.
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:43 PM
So nice to hear--much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
May Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 6:05 PM
A romantic rhapsody Vijay, Well penned..
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Many thanks Joseph--much appreciate.
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 5:20 PM
I can hear the music thanks to your well orchestrated words. They give me great pleasure to read, Have a great day Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:43 PM
So nice to hear my friend--much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 4:55 PM
You rose to the challenge well with this romantic verse Vijay. Good luck Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Tom--much appreciate.
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