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Music of the Night

With the tremulous dark vista so far and yet so near Abandoning my defences ~ I stand in awe ~ not in fear
Virtuoso Maestro unleash a Composition Grandioso To Overtures of a Symphony herald the raging storming Tempo Staccato Strains cascading rapid torrents of Treble and Tremolo Rhythmic Beats a Prelude to an intensifying Triple Time Scherzo
Silken sails unfurled I embrace the storm of your tempestuous symphony Crashing~ drifting~ floating~ flowing~ tasting ~awakening my melodic epiphany
Effervescent chilling thrilling air as Allegro whelms Allegretto Electrifying sizzling Musette ~ Trills a mesmeric Capriccio Registers booming Bass Notes rumbling within your thunderous Vibrato Echoing claps of thunder Prompt a spectacular Cadence Crescendo
I release my Spirit to gratify every phantasy in its sight The soaring Tempest of my Soul liberates its own Philharmonic flight Inhibitions abandoned as I succumb to your Music of the Night
Footnote: By way of musical term allegory, I have endeavored to dramatize and romanticize the Awesomeness of an Electrical Thunderstorm and simultaneously likening it to the rush of tactual Sensual, Sexuality and Emotions experienced in romantic instances. I felt that the instrumental rendition of ‘The Phantom’ Musical, aptly accentuates the trepidation, anticipation and elating sentiments portrayed in the various elements of my poem.

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Date: 9/21/2018 6:24:00 PM
You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into life...absorbing all its beauty whilst uniquely dispersing this gift to others. If it wasn't for souls like yourself we wouldn’t have the eyes or ears to see and hear the wonders that surround us. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/20/2018 3:16:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic, Maria. Yes, you have finally done it. Applause....
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/21/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thanks White Wolf, you being a great musician would appreciate this, I appreciate your visit....Maria hugs
Date: 9/9/2018 8:59:00 PM
This is one of my favourite songs from the Phantom. The poem..music to my ears..
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Date: 9/6/2018 8:25:00 AM
You wrote like a maestro...conducting words to sound...A well done poem indeed...All the best Maria
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:05:00 AM
You cleverly appeal to the heart and soul, Maria. The intermingling of musical cadence and the sensual transition to heights of passion captivate the imagination! Once again you have fully availed yourself of the power of dramatic verse. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/20/2018 1:32:00 AM
I'm back to reread this beauty again Maria! xxoo : )
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:54:00 AM
Music reverberates throughout the whole universe according to Pythagoras and so it does into the human soul! It takes an adept musician and poet to combine the melody of music and the magic of poetry to achieve such a remarkable result dearest, Maria! A FAVE for me!
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Date: 8/16/2018 11:06:00 AM
Visions shall stand before audiences to make sounds that lovers of music shall dance too !
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Date: 8/13/2018 12:21:00 AM
Beautiful imagery from a beautiful lady...
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:38:00 AM
Excellent and well penned my friend. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/8/2018 7:03:00 AM
You have combined music and poetry! Both have an undefined, nameless and infinite sensations.. Music, liberates the soul.. inspires the mind.. awakens the heart.. Poetry, tangible beats that speak loud the aches, joys and thoughts of Human souls.. Poetry and Music intertwined to bring forth a fulfilled soul, healed and freed.. A brilliant work of art dear Maria! I enormously missed you and your wonderful writes.. A FAV. Looking forward to hearing from you soon and reading your beauties. Hugs.
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:59:00 AM
Your this poem is beyond beautiful, simply magnificent and a joy to read, especially the music and the video, I really enjoyed it, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 8/3/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Faraz , that is so nice of you to visit and comment. I truly appreciate your support....Maria
Date: 7/31/2018 6:24:00 PM
An intelligent and electrifying poetic feat! Throwing flowers upon the virtual stage!
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Kim, caught them lol....Maria hugs
Date: 7/22/2018 10:33:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem Maria, loved everything about it with a fine taste of music to boot...Awesome! A fav for me...Charlie :)
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Date: 8/1/2018 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Charles my dear friend, I so appreciate your lovely words and support....Maria hugs
Date: 7/22/2018 2:28:00 PM
An absolutely stunning magnificent poem Maria! I could visualize the storm in the majesty of nature. I enjoy listening to Phantom in my VW Bug while driving. The acoustics are wonderful in that little bug. This poem is beyond beautiful! : ) xxoo Going into my faves!
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Date: 8/1/2018 5:21:00 AM
That is so kind of you Connie, thank you. I bet you got a few looks playing the Phantom in your cute little VW Lol. So glad that you enjoyed this .....Maria hugs
Date: 7/22/2018 8:49:00 AM
((((((WOW-sers)))))) a truly symphonic poetic masterpiece accompanied by a thunderous roar...lightening has struck the soup...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/1/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thanks WW my dear friend, I so appreciate your lovely words and support. Love and Light always...Maria hug
Date: 7/20/2018 9:57:00 AM
True brilliance from A TO Z, my great friend.... Your talent awes me and your creativity flows off the highest charts! Wondrously crafted and deeply enlightening in its heart, colors, melody and depths.. A fav.. a true glowing gem...
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Date: 8/1/2018 5:24:00 AM
That is very kind of you Robert my dear friend, always appreciative of the support you give, thank you....Maria hugs
Date: 7/19/2018 4:10:00 PM
How very beautiful in every respect! You have topped the charts with this amazing piece! I am captivated by your wonderful, charming words and the music you made in this awesomepoem! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/19/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Pandita so glad that you liked it.Thanks for the visit and lovely comment....Maria hugs
Date: 7/18/2018 3:17:00 PM
Out of this world poetry, Maria. I'm a fan of Phantom, and your rhythmic injection of awesome words, totally complements the whole scenario.
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Date: 7/19/2018 6:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry, I really appreciate your wonderful comments and support as well....Maria hugs
Date: 7/18/2018 9:37:00 AM
Love that music video Maria... Wonderful use of vocabulary here, such a wonderful talented poet like you is a great asset to this site... I see how you were inspired to write this poem, that last stanza sums it up so well.. A fave for me..
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Date: 7/19/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Si, that is a really nice thing to hear. I hope I have been a help to some people here. I have reached out to the younger ones like Faraz, and he has been very grateful. Thank you for the Fave and support always, which you have given to many over the years....Maria hugs
Date: 7/18/2018 4:39:00 AM
Maria, your parallel's pop.. all you wished for in your notes has become a reality in this captivating write!!!
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Date: 7/18/2018 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Lyric, for the lovely creative comment Coming from a great musician like yourself I truly appreciate it....Maria
Date: 7/18/2018 3:15:00 AM
Your poem surpasses by far in beauty any comment that my humble pen might attempt to write! A HUGE FAV for me dearest Maria XXX
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Date: 7/18/2018 6:04:00 AM
What a beautiful comment Demetrios , and I am so glad that this appealed. Thanks so much for the fave and support always, it is truly appreciated my dearest friend....Maria xxx
Date: 7/18/2018 2:32:00 AM
OMG SENSATIONAL! i do say I prefer the shorter ones as i have the attention of an ant..lol..This is my favorite song as well and thanks for featuring my girlfriend in the picture. I was wondering where she went...10/10 love it.
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Date: 7/18/2018 5:36:00 AM
I would have thought that I'd at least get an 11, seeing that I found your girlfriend for you? Thanks Martin for the visit and lovely comment. So appreciate it....Maria hugs
Date: 7/17/2018 6:15:00 PM
Wow! Wow! Wow! Incredible, Maria. Your musical vocabulary is so perfectly "in tune" with the Music of the Night. Just amazing and wonderful. And, I can't even say how much I loved the video/music. Sooo beautiful. A FAVE for sure and a poem I will never forget. Just love it.
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Date: 7/18/2018 6:01:00 AM
Wow, thats 3 Wows my friend. I'm so thrilled that you think so Carole and thank you for sharing this on your Music Lovers All. I am deeply grateful for your lovely comments and support always....Maria hugs
Date: 7/17/2018 12:56:00 PM
Wherever there is an abandoning of inhibitions, that's where I want to be:) Beautifully rendered, Maria.
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Date: 7/18/2018 5:53:00 AM
Nothing like a good thunder storm to do that I guess. Thanks Daniel so much for your lovely comment....Maria hugs
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