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Music, Language of Love

Melodious melody of love
                               Lyrical language of the heart
                    Calling continually entwined in loves duet
                          Touched tenderly by life’s opera
                        Musical movements caressing the soul
                    Seraphic song  of the soul a sweet seduction

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 10/21/2011 2:03:00 PM

Beautiful write Lori. It reads like song lyrics...soothing.

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/2/2011 10:30:00 PM

The heart and the mind are united. When melody and words are requited. To fill up the air, and bring calm to despair. That's when the soul gets excited.

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/15/2011 7:57:00 PM

Another very nice flow of beautiful words...

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 9/14/2011 4:08:00 AM

love music...so i will definitely love this one

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 6:39:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments I greatly appreciate it!!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/14/2011 12:51:00 AM

Congrats Lori! Isn't it nice to have others read and really absorb your poetry's meaning? You have unveiled such a beautiful song with this write. Seraphic song of the soul...great s's....musical movements caressing the soul..nice entry for this contest. Congrats to you and your creation here. Gwendolen

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 4:43:00 PM

Thank your for your kind words and it much blesses my soul to know that some one absorbs the meaning of my poems!! I cant compare with the overwhelming talent of you and my fellow poets but to have one of you amazing poets comment is as awesome to me as winning a contest. I value your comments!!! Thank you fo very much my friend!!!!!!!!!====Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Lori

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 6:42:00 PM

Thank Dr. Ram I greatly appreciate your kind words, and reading of my work!!!!!!!! I value your oppinion and those of my fellow poets. Thank you again!!!---Lori

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2011 7:08:00 PM

Lori, this poem is so beautiful. From time to time we are all touched by "life's opera" and I hope one day to hear the seraphs sing. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 4:47:00 PM

Thank you for your very kind comments on my work. I greatly appreciate your comments and time in reading my poems. I greatly value your oppinions and that of my fellow poets! Thank you again!!----Lori

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 11:30:00 PM

lori, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your encouraging words and reading of my poems. Thank you again your oppinion is greatly valued!!!----Lori

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 7:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work...Congrats..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/12/2011 7:21:00 PM

beautiful well deserved win!!

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2011 12:51:00 PM

Lori, Thanks for the honor of getting to read your "Music, Language of Love", I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your second place. Agape, Moses

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 6:45:00 PM

Thank you for considering my poem! AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS!!! Your oppinion is greatly valued to me. Thank you again!!!!!!!!---Lori

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2011 12:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lori! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Lori. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 4:01:00 AM

hey Lori congrats on your brilliant win, sweet secuction.. i love it..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 1:26:00 AM

Very pretty Lori. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 1:10:00 AM

Congrats Lori on your sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry luv..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/12/2011 12:27:00 AM

A 2nd place congratulations Lori for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2011 10:46:00 PM

very nice and I love the seraphic song line!!

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/14/2011 6:48:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on my poems!!! I greatly appreciate your reading of my poems!!!Thank you again your oppinion is greatly valued!! ----Lori

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2011 4:29:00 PM

Great alliteration here..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winners' circle to me..Sara