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Music Please

Play a song for me My heart longs to be set free Held captive so long I am trying to be strong Is the instrument all wrong?

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Date: 2/24/2015 12:26:00 PM
Very nicely worded Sharon,don't think its all wrong,you might just have to find another tune lol. Thanks tonytocaa
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Date: 2/23/2015 10:51:00 AM
What is the instrument of the captivity? I like the challenge of imagination here. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/25/2010 6:28:00 AM
Sometimes we just need the right note to restart Sharon, and so many out there are waiting for that note. It's a matter of finding it > have a lovely day >> James
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:08:00 PM
Music can sure help relieve some of the tension when going through hard times. But sometimes one has to do something very drastic to bring up a change that could free you. Nice write, though sad, but no one will have a problem relate to this. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:34:00 PM
like this tanda Sharon, i like your ending,..P.D.
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Date: 10/22/2010 4:49:00 PM
enjoyed... interesting perspective!
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:14:00 PM
Nice one Sharon.. enjoyed your poetry today with its creative theme .. happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:08:00 PM
This is very good and so is the heart felt message,
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