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Dearest sister, if you are reading this- I have passed on, will you please have my name and "a poet" engraved upon; the stone that marks my decaying bones, where my writing ever moans . . . though muse is now a sweet bird flown. Plant me flowers and come often to see how they have grown, a mortal, bird now sings in all seasons from the trees up above. Sister, could you set my words free with love? Take them to a mountain top and let them soar and drift. My last words- "Time on earth was so beautiful but too swift." _____________________________ June 30, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/'A Bird Flown' Copyright Protected, ID 18-1121-417-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Standard Contest 570, sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 3/12/2019 7:24:00 PM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2019 7:33:00 PM
Line, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !
Date: 3/7/2019 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart, such a deep moving poem. Hugs Eve ~`*,
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 7:39:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations on the compliment ~
Date: 3/6/2019 10:40:00 PM
Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. The emotions, the wishes- a touch of beauty. Tenderness. Congratulations Dear Heart, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 7:40:00 PM
Brandy, thanks for that lovely comment, and congratulations ~
Date: 3/6/2019 10:36:00 AM
Congrats. SK
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 7:41:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 3/6/2019 3:01:00 AM
Ah, a poetic masterpiece, my friend. Lovely. "my writing ever moans, though muse is now a sweet bird flown...." Each word more beautiful than the one before....
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 7:41:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much for your wonderful comment ~

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