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Murmurs

My mind is a dreamy river, that flows untiring - smooth and rapid, murmuring the words it adores, the burbles of its ponderings. These burbles of my musings are simple little things I admire, that capture my imagination and get bottled up in my mind, waiting impatiently to escape and sprinkle in fragments of letters and scribblings. When creative instinct is aroused, the poet's eloquent pen dances to the tunes of his chords of inspiration, soothing and healing a wounded soul. Words that splash from a poetic mind, brightens the inner vision of the blind. They relate to the listener's heart, Calming his wavering mind. A poet's gifted verses dig out those untold secrets, from the innermost cores of unknown minds that connect to those lines of rhythm. This dreamy river will gently swirl and flow, to become wider - carrying loads of insights. Ceaseless will it continue its course until it reaches the end of its journey. May weaken then, but would not stop, creating valuable thoughts of wisdom, in the fertile deltas it creates, before it becomes one with the ocean. Date: 02/06/2023 2022 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney Date: 11/27/2020 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 14 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney Date: 11/27/2020 Where Do We Poets Go Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 3/25/2023 7:59:00 AM
Dear Ani, congratulations for your excellent final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. It is a pleasure to partake in the inspiring beauty of this creative and captivating gem once again. I am honored to share the podium with you, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/5/2023 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations for your HM, sweet friend. So many people were in the marathon and you did very well among them all . A very well deserved honor
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Date: 3/4/2023 1:40:00 PM
Anitha, after 267 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, we've reached the finish line of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Congratulations on placing 16th overall in the marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/5/2023 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Mark for the marathon contest and my placement. Congratulations to you too for the successful finish of the Marathon contest. Due to some personal commitments, I was unable to enter several of the 27 contests of the Marathon. Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2022 10:27:00 AM
"Murmuring words it adores." What a wonderful line that spawns more wonderful images Ani. Beautiful metaphors for inspiration. Your words are gentle yet powerful as flowing water. Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings flowing with peace.
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Date: 10/3/2022 3:51:00 AM
You've written an inspiring story line in your entry. Congratulations, Ani.
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Date: 10/1/2022 7:35:00 PM
Dear Ani, I am enthralled by the rich metaphorical beauty of your poem. A deep, eloquent and meaningful piece that shines with your creative artistry and elegant expression. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/28/2022 3:36:00 PM
You have taken me to that dreamy river, and I have rejoiced with you in it, congrats on your win, love this
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vie for the visit, wonderful comment and the congrats... Am glad you rejoiced with me in that "dreamy" river... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 9/28/2022 9:43:00 AM
"When creative instinct is aroused, the poet's eloquent pen dances to the tunes of his chords of inspiration, "..... This is exactly what happens when a poet's mind gets fuelled by a sudden urge. The image of the river hurtling down to the ocean is very catchy. Lovely poem, dear Ani. Congratulations on your great win.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Valsa for your visit, inspiring comment and the congrats... Am so glad you could relate to my scribble on my poetic murmurs... Have a blessed day my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 9/28/2022 6:55:00 AM
The metaphors are outstanding in this piece. It flows beautifully. Congrats on the win Anitha.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much Mark Massey... Am glad you liked the metaphors I used... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
Date: 9/28/2022 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! The murmurs of the poet, that like the ocean rise and swell from the tributaries of creativity! :)Paulette
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much Paulette for the visit, comment and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 9/27/2022 7:31:00 PM
"A poet's gifted verses dig out those untold secrets" - very beautiful. Hearing from you after long. By the way, my book is out. Could you kindly sened me your postal address? I will send you a copy as soon as possible. If you are not able to contact me in soupmail, kindly note thid email: christurajalex@gmail.com Thank you.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:43:00 AM
Chris thank you so very much for the visit, comment and the congrats. So glad your book has been published.. Will mail you soon. Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
Date: 9/27/2022 3:18:00 PM
"The burbles of its ponderings. The burbles of my musings ..." I love your metaphorical burbles, your "dreamy river" that "would not stop" "creating valuable thoughts of wisdom in the fertile deltas it creates, before becoming one with the ocean." Nicely done, Anitha! Congratulations on your second-place finish on Mile 14 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. We're over halfway to the finish line! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 15 has already started.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much Mark for the interesting contest and my placement. I am glad you liked the metaphors I used. Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
Date: 2/2/2021 1:55:00 PM
I see you used the river to ocean metaphor. I love to do that with love and romance poetry. You have done it for words and how they flow onto bigger and better things, to inspire the consciousness of humanity. very well done, Anitha. And I see it go a top win. Belated congrats to you.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear sweet friend... I have sent a mail to you... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/30/2020 1:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful, and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/30/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata Agustin. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 9:30:00 PM
Beautiful murmurs....Congrats on your win dear Anita.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 11:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. Have a great day :)
Date: 11/29/2020 12:10:00 PM
- Dear Ani, a really wonderful poem :) - Congratulations on your win in the: "Where do we poets go?" contest :) - Well deserved a top first place - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 6:22:00 PM
Dear Anne.. Thank you so much for your continuous support my dear friend. And your poems SHINE just like your character. Love n hugs :)
Date: 11/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. My heartiest blessing.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 10:10:00 AM
Maam.. Thank you so much. Your blessings mean a Lot to me!!! LOVE n HUGS..:)
Date: 11/29/2020 9:51:00 AM
Congrats on your top win,Anitha!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much L. J. Carber. Have a great day :)
Date: 11/29/2020 8:11:00 AM
Ani you excel in this poem! you describe the river flow like Tennyson wrote his brook! Well done! congrats on your top win! I could not bring myself to write anything on the topic! Pleased to see you leading the list of winners!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 10:04:00 AM
Krishji thank you so much. Actually I too didn't have any idea before starting to write. It's ok. You ALWAYS do well and SHINE. You can participate in the next one. Have a great blessed evening. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 8:05:00 AM
My mind is a dreamy river, that flows untiring - smooth and rapid, murmuring the words it adores, the burbles of its ponderings... What a lovely start to your poem, thats how many a poet will feel and I like the word choice of, burbles. One of your best poems.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much SO. Am happy you liked it. The contest was interesting and as I was thinking for an idea, the metaphor of river popped up and I developed on it. Again I appreciate your patience in giving your valuable feedback for each and every entry in the contest. God bless. Have a great evening!! :)
Date: 11/28/2020 5:30:00 AM
I like the metaphor of river rushing to the ocean. Much to gleam about poetic discourse in your write, Ani--well done.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/28/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijayji for the visit and comment. Have a great day :)
Date: 11/27/2020 10:06:00 AM
Well done...Enjoyed the read
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/28/2020 3:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Arturo. Have a blessed day :)

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