Murmers of My Heart

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Murmurs of my heart Poetry Contest
Sponsored by JCB Brul 12/07/23

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My broken heart weeps, I sob as I write your eulogy… goodbye gran

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Terry Miller

Date: 7/17/2023 3:06:00 AM

Excellent monoku, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2023 7:21:00 AM

Indeed! At the mere mention of my mom, my 8 year old grandson’s heart weeps. Oh wouldn’t she be touched. He used to hide shyly but oh how he loved her…everybody did. Sorry for your loss, Jan! Congratulations on your win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:39:00 AM

Really filled with feelings of loss and longing. Beautiful monoku. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2023 1:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Christuraj:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2023 10:46:00 AM

... sad ... so sad - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2023 3:34:00 PM

thanks Anne lise fictional of course for me:-) husg Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/13/2023 7:08:00 AM

The depth of feeling touched you monoku Jan! Glad to see it's fiction! Happy Thursday xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2023 9:27:00 AM

thanks Mike :-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/12/2023 1:50:00 PM

very touching, jan! i hope it isn't true...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2023 4:38:00 PM

no pure fiction Ilene, i never had grandparents only a step step grandma xx