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Murder and a Heist - Homophone Rhyme

HOMOPHONE RHYME STYLE TRIAL 2 I saw a murder with my one good eye A loud one too. What was the cause? Commotion in the tree, thought I Judging by incessant caws It was in the early morning Just a hair, I think, past eight Maybe they were in mourning Or was it something they had ate I leaned out by the window pane To see what they had in their cache Well my pocket really felt the pain A nest made out of all my cash! I wanted back what I had seen I think my watch was up there too! But last time it was quite the scene And I left with one eye less than two

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Date: 10/23/2022 6:10:00 AM
Creative lines you have penned with a bit of humor within. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2022 1:36:00 PM
excellent example of what your contest calls for, and just what I imagined, nice and light!
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Date: 10/9/2022 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Excited to see what people come up with :)
Date: 10/8/2022 6:09:00 AM
Gotcha, this could be fun! Looks like it’s old hat to you
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Date: 10/9/2022 2:16:00 PM
Haha thanks Jeff, thought it might be something kind of fun and different

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