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murder of crows fly like fish in the sea absent scarecrow

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Valsa George

Date: 8/10/2024 7:31:00 PM

A number of crows flying in the air look like a shoal of fish in water. A lovely senryu. Great entry for the contest. All the Best, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/11/2024 2:52:00 AM

Yes, Valsa. Those birds and the fish go in a very similar pattern. I would what a bunch of humans would do in a stream or in the air. Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 12:07:00 PM

Creative senryu, i love your wordplay here dear sara, you did this form very well. I love the second line the simile used there is clever! Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light always.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2024 2:08:00 PM

Why, thank you, IE. I need all the light I can get. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 7/26/2024 12:35:00 PM

Great analogy... like fish in the sea... some crows are not even scared of a scarecrow..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2024 1:37:00 PM

I agree, SO, most crows are not afraid of a scarecrow at least not after the first day or two when they figure out it isn't real or isn't any danger. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2024 10:56:00 AM

LOL on your ending!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2024 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K