Muffins

MUFFINS Six Muffins Golden brown With poppy seeds Sitting on a rack Aroma wonderful! I baked them with my own hands Would it hurt to eat one right now? Coffee is hot But no! They must cool Hmm? Box doesn’t specify Eat you fool! Due to inspirational void, I offer this taste treat instead. daver

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/13/2011 9:23:00 PM

I would love to sit with you and have one Daver. I would be a fool not to.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2011 7:33:00 PM

Just don't burn the room of your mouth, Daver. These poppy seed muffins sound delicious! Love, Carolyn

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/22/2011 8:33:00 AM

Hmmmmm...wohah is like lemonade? Might be a great accompaniment to these delectable muffins, Daver? I thought I'd commented on this before, now I remember this had prompted me to bake some. So, only you and Charles Laughton know the answer...that's being tricky, you've pressed my 'I wanna find out' button! I'm sure you knew I'd be curious...mutter mutter...Wishing you the best!! Love, Mikki

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/12/2011 6:07:00 PM

many times that is the office from which I work. The inspirational void office. Thank you for the taste treat. I love hot muffins. nice imagery for the senses, Daver.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2011 2:52:00 PM

Delicious write, Daver. I could just fancy a hot buttered muffin... Yes, Falstaff was Shakespeare's best creation in my opinion. Merry Wives was the first play I ever saw. I love the opera Falstaff too. We went to see it recently and it was awesome, despite Falstaff being a 1940s spiv, LOL.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2011 11:46:00 AM

oh yumm, Dave :) I am now craving for lemon poppy muffins and coffee and at 245am, this can't be good :) this sure is one delicious read :) hugs :)

Elaine George

Date: 7/11/2011 2:10:00 PM

Coffee and a hot muffin would be just heaven. Oh! to dream. I think I will go and make some myself. Lainie

Judy Ball

Date: 7/11/2011 7:55:00 AM

I like my muffins still warm with butteer. Eat em up. Good job Daver. God Bless, JB

James Peranteau

Date: 7/11/2011 6:42:00 AM

A tasty read, and treat dear poet! And I find no void here my friend with your inspiration...the muffin I'm about to go get now will go great with my green tea sir ! Have a wonderful week Dave ! Much love, james

James Foulk

Date: 7/10/2011 8:49:00 PM

sounds yummy. love muffins love this pome.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/10/2011 2:57:00 PM

Yummy, I hope you put lots of butter on! I can almost taste - great verse.